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ado-mi [2017-06-21 06:05:25 +0000 UTC]

Hello there !

Colour :
The colours are very nice and I like how you made use of a green light instead of a plain white one as it makes it more interesting. I also like the variation of lines that you can find in the background as it adds variation to the piece and it makes the bottom part more lively.
I personally think that there lacks shape in the background and that there should be a variation of light between the cityscape and the sky. THe sky could be make a dark blue or purple to make it distinct.

Concept :
The concept is really nice and I love the dramatic effect the lighting gives. Is she emitting some sort of energy ? Either way, it's very modern and magical, one of my favourite concepts
There's not much to say but maybe you could try adding some concepts to the sky like a night sky. I would love to see a little more down there too to see where exactly the light is coming from as I am quite unsure but you don't necessarily have to add that but it would make the concept more clear.

Construction :
The lighting is really nice and I love how you applied it. It's not too strong and is the perfect shade. Very nice. I also love how you did the eyes, they're very piercing and those bolts make for a nice effect.
This is more on anatomy (it's the bane of my existence too blegh) but anyway, the head for me is too big and the nose is a bit protruded (though you said you fixed it which explains why it's so so you can choose to ignore my comment for the current situation) Her chest is also too high and small ? The bulge is quite round but the size itself is too small. Also, I can't see the right part of her chest. With the current lighting, there should be a little bit of light reflected on it but there's none in the piece. The tie looks quite unnatural there since it should curve along with the chest but it doesn't really follow that. Now for the green energy things around her, they're a nice touch but they're too small and hard to notice at first. Maybe you couldtry making them bigger and adding a glow to them too. Lastly, the lighting is a bit off for me. Looking at the light from the back, it should come from the lower left part of the picture but the light on the girl is telling me it's coming from her left side completely. I think just removing some of the light from the right (her left) side could help fix the lighting and adding more shadows would help too.

All in all, lovely work. The concept really is nice and I am a personal fan of this. Keep it up

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blitzinfinite [2017-06-20 21:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Love the beautifully done background!

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GirlyTiara [2017-06-20 18:16:11 +0000 UTC]

I come from Project Comment so I am here to give you feedback from my point of view! I am not a professional and you do not have to take heed to my words, I only wish to help you improve.

So, onto the feedback!
The background and lighting is pretty nice (better than what I can do) but the character could use a bit of work, especially in the proportions... I'm not sure, but I do believe the face is too high on his....front side of his head... The ear is a little too small, if you look at your own body (well,I wouldn't know if you have a deformality or something, but lets say you don't and this character probably doesn't either) the top of your ear is at the height of your eyebrow, and the bottom just about reaches your nose. 
The character could use more shading, as the light is coming from behind, and I see those..streaks of green. It looks like it may have been intended to be an electric effect, but it's not very clear...
The character's body is a little small compared to their head as well.

I hope I didn't discourage you, I really do believe this is a nice piece (I can't do effective background and lighting  like that), and beyond my current capabilities, but I hope these critiques will help you improve!

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AlysiaPlayz [2017-06-20 17:54:10 +0000 UTC]

This is great, maybe highlight the eyes a little and make the background darker and the dots brighter. This picture gives off an awesome effect. Nice job.

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