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volleyball-freeak — You Were the Death of Me
Published: 2010-03-13 02:15:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Your words were a knife in my back,
Your betrayal a bullet in my heart
Tearing my flesh,
Tearing my trust

I saw it coming,
Like a man sees a storm approaching
But I disregarded it

My umbrella stayed in the closet
Next to my boots, my coat, my hat
Ignorance is bliss,
And I embraced that thought

I was like your baby
You spoon fed me deliciously hopeful lies
Held me closer than a friend
Took my hand and led me astray

But I was so small, so weak
My eyes weren't open yet to your treachery
So I followed like a puppy
Then you put me down

Your words drove this knife through my back
Your betrayal pulled the trigger that wounded my heart
I shred my flesh,
Like you shredded our trust

I saw you coming
Like an assassin with a party mask
But I ignored it

Love does illogical things to the mind
Hope in vain,
And be unkind
Stab your love,
And shoot yourself
You started this strife,
I ended my life
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Comments: 9

Flarimar [2010-07-16 18:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Ohh Thats good! I like it, great figurative language!

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volleyball-freeak In reply to Flarimar [2010-07-21 19:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. (:
It was my english teacher's favorite.

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Flarimar In reply to volleyball-freeak [2010-07-21 23:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Welcome! I can see why, it was great!

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MoonaSpooks [2010-03-16 10:12:43 +0000 UTC]

oh very good desciptive writing Who's Dante???There was a guy in Assassin's Creed 2 called Dante I think the main character kills him in a sword ring or something tho...

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volleyball-freeak In reply to MoonaSpooks [2010-03-17 02:31:51 +0000 UTC]

thank you!
Dante Alighieri. author of the Inferno, which is about his journey through Hell. there's a video game based off of it. never heard of Assassin's Creed. maybe it's based off of him!

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MoonaSpooks In reply to volleyball-freeak [2010-03-17 02:50:03 +0000 UTC]

oh kewel I think we have a DVD called Inferno
Hahah I doubt assassin's creed is based on it, the Dante guy is only in there for like 2 levels, 1 you pick pocket him cause he cheated and stole your prize and the next 1 you kill him for trying to kill you

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volleyball-freeak In reply to MoonaSpooks [2010-03-22 07:39:25 +0000 UTC]

haha that just made my day. xD you have no idea.

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MoonaSpooks In reply to volleyball-freeak [2010-03-22 07:58:54 +0000 UTC]

hahah?

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volleyball-freeak In reply to MoonaSpooks [2010-03-25 01:44:06 +0000 UTC]

yeah I've been drinking too much caffine...

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