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Published: 2005-09-12 13:06:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 448; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description He sits there looking at me
I wonder what he is thinking
Suddenly i feel naked
My thoughts
My past
Exposed

Looking away now in shock
Still, that does not stop him
He's in my head
No escape

I look back at him
He smiles at me
He digs deeper in my mind
I need to get away

I get off the bus
I still feel him
I now hear his voice
He's telling me i cant escape

I try to fall asleep
All i hear is him laughing
Laughing at me
I cant do anything

Years later
He's still there
Now rather than hiding
I faced my fears
I befreinded the voice in my head
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Comments: 10

KujasUltimate [2006-04-02 19:39:01 +0000 UTC]

Man, I hope I never hear voices in my head.....I probably won't be accepting abou it either- I'd go crazey, and eventually bash my head in to a wall.....Talk about a sacrifical suicide.

Anyways, Ur writing is great work Cheers*

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Bethuel09 [2005-10-13 21:25:33 +0000 UTC]

haha wonderful my beloved bastard... truly wonderful

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Bethuel09 [2005-10-13 21:22:43 +0000 UTC]

haha wonderful my beloved bastard... truly wonderful

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AngelPrisoner [2005-10-02 15:01:43 +0000 UTC]

i have had voices, you did this really well if you havent had any before

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Vonapets In reply to AngelPrisoner [2005-10-02 15:05:51 +0000 UTC]

i have them also, lol its just weird, i have my music blasting, in another world and then i hear someone yell my name... the other day i heard a dog bark but i made up hearing as much as i did in the poem, i have only ever heard basic words not anything more... twould be cool i reckon

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AngelPrisoner In reply to Vonapets [2005-10-02 15:10:42 +0000 UTC]

yeah i have had it for a good year or more now and its just this one voice, but i also have halunciations of him to, so basically im fucked in the head i do kind of like it, because you never feel alone, kind of like a comfort. this is my poem about it all if your interested [link]

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lady472 [2005-09-15 19:46:48 +0000 UTC]

The last stanza through me off a little, but i like it.

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AirySoul [2005-09-14 05:44:02 +0000 UTC]

nice.

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Shirubi [2005-09-12 19:05:41 +0000 UTC]

awesome poem ^-^

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kyzalie [2005-09-12 13:40:14 +0000 UTC]

You so saw a weird man on the bus.....

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