QTroubadour [2013-08-07 17:39:07 +0000 UTC]
This is cool; it's always fun to see strong colors lighting stuff.
As a critique, the part where her abdomen meets right right (our left) leg seems a bit disjointed. Maybe adding a fold or wrinkle in the suit stretching across the indent firmed there would help connect the two. It would also help make the cloth look more natural as even form-fitting clothing doesn't usually suction itself into crevasses so it usually stretches apart and is kinda wavy in the area where it's not actually making skin contact.
Hope that made sense. In the event that it didn't I apologize for my horrid tendency to favor gibberish over English. Great work with this painting, man, keep it up!
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VonStreff In reply to QTroubadour [2013-08-08 02:13:08 +0000 UTC]
Awesome feedback, man. Really appreciate that. I will keep that in mind for my next piece.
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OwletJessa555 [2013-08-03 07:01:37 +0000 UTC]
Aha, I like her sword. Is it a sorta of saber sword, isn't it?
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