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sweetsourcherry [2013-05-29 03:45:01 +0000 UTC]

hello! i'm just a lowly creeper hehe, but i wanted to stop by and tell you that you have lovely work!

i really like the color schemes you chose, it makes everything very harmonious and as a whole, brings the piece together.
if i may be so bold to continue... for me, the anatomy of the girl's legs on the right side (black jacket white socks) doesn't seem to make much sense to me. i've tried to visualize it and i actually redlined it a bit on the side really quickly. when i gave this piece a perfunctory scan, everything seemed fine, but upon closer examination, i think really just a few minor adjustments could make a world of a difference. i hope i make sense owo;; for instance if you adjusted the shoulders of the man in the grey coat, i think he would have a less awkward, hulking stance (unless that was the intention, for which i stand corrected). of course this is just what i think — you are absolutely in no way shape or form obligated to listen to me.

all in all, you have great style and the expressions of the characters are captured extremely well. fabulous art ♥

if you weren't looking for critique i just... /shot
ehehe, if that is the case you can just ignore my ramblings (:

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AirTyler [2013-05-21 07:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Luv dat hover chair

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