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I always look at the work before I look to see who the artist is. I have to say I was surprised and yet then I said nope he still brings the viewer into the image. I guess I was surprised because I haven't seen your portrait photography yet. You still have your signature of how you include your viewer in your work. There is no doubt that she is looking at me and we are having a dialog with her eyes. This makes the image personal and effective.
I do feel that this image should be centered a bit more If you were to frame this image her nose would be touching the frame or almost. Yet there is a bit of extra room behind her ear and hair. The other thing I would watch out for when doing portraits are those loose hairs that seem to stray into peoples faces like the one down the middle of her forehead and goes to her eye. Try to watch for those and move them out of the way.
The colors are wonderful soft and natural. Her eye is perfect and so is her expression. She must have felt very comfortable with you and confident in your skills. When photographing people it is very important that they have a connection with the photographer because it will show in the work.
I would play with the cropping some. I don't know if you have cropped this in or if you shot it with this crop. I would like to see maybe less forehead giving a closer crop. Also maybe try a crop with her whole chin.
Over all this is a great photograph the colors are perfect and her eye has a huge impact on the viewer. Well done!
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Thank you again for your support and the time you spend for my work.
It is not cropped, shot like this. You are right about the loose hair, it was windy and there was always hair everywhere
The chin should definitely be in the frame, my mistake !!!!
thanks for mentioning my mistakes !!! i really appreciate it !!!
You can be more strict, i prefer constructive comments
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I see very little wrong with this picture.
I like the soft focus and the way you have highlighted strands of the hair.
The focal point is the left eye which is perfect......maybe a LITTLE more highlighting on the iris.
The right eye I find a bit 'harsh'. Maybe you could lighten this a little.
Would like to see a little more lighting on the nose jewel and the bottom lip.
Otherwise a good job.
When you take a photo like this, where a person is looking sideways, it is always difficult to get the right eye...........as I suggested before soften it a little.
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thank you so much for the critique
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not only beautiful but knows how to look at the camera
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Again a beautiful portrait, but you shouldnt cut out the shin, still awesome shot, very natural, and love her expression, and she's incredibly gorgeous
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i wanted an even tighter shot but the 85mm lens can't focus closer..... you are right maybe i shouldn't cut her chin.
She is very pretty, and the most important is that she knows how to look at the camera.
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Well yeah, a close up of her eyes or more close shot to her face would have great, and yes, it crossed my mind inmideatly when i saw her face, she really know how to look ate the camera, becouse it seems so natural that its like shes looking at you, well me in this case, is more that she's looking at the photographer than looking to the camera, is really great, makes more compenetration betweeen the viewer and the model in the photo... yeah the shin thing is something i really look up, becouse is a beautiful part of the face and it lets you make a more detailed opinion of the photography... you have luck to have a great model like her... just bring in more awesome portraits, i will fav and comment all!
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i have some closer ones with her lens, a 70-300mm but i preferred the quality of the 85mm for portraits.
I'll try to arrange with her again soon
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yeah 85mm is one of my fav too, well in theory becouse i dont have a nice camera hahahaha, but of the pictures i have seen they are always with 85mm...
wonderful, will be waiting for it!
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to tell you the truth i prefer the 50mm i should have bought the 85mm macro it was about the same price
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man dont know, i havent worked with any of those... im one camera out so i have none 
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a unique natural looking perfect portrait, really,
after all the PS violence, this is a breeze
Phill
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you are welcome
Phill
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