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Vyctorian β€” Hijab
Published: 2012-09-08 11:24:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 3747; Favourites: 57; Downloads: 0
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Description She walks on to the bus with a gentle step,
Her elegant face framed in beautiful patterned silk,
She sits down in the back of the bus and people scurry away,
Men ignore her, as woman with unveiled heads mock her discreetly,
They think she's ignoring them so they speak louder and louder,

She remains steadfast and cheerful,
Her eyes always glistening with happiness few dream of,
Her smile still warm and peaceful,
Not a thought of ill will or intent,
Despite the fact that many suspect it,

Joy remains on her face, with a twinkling in her eyes,
The men who ignored her get off a their stop,
The women who mocked her get off at their stop,
And finally she get's off, unfazed and with a spring in her step.



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Comments: 104

uglygosling [2016-04-13 01:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Some years ago I made a delivery to a hospital in Philadelphia, and on my way back out I ended up sharing an elevator with a woman wearing a niqab (?) with only her eyes visible. I think we shared a brief friendly chatter before reaching the ground floor and going our separate ways. A thought I sometimes have is that women here (in the US) wear such or similarΒ coverings presumably because they choose to do so, but in some countries such as Saudi Arabia, Iran since the fall of the Shah, and Afghanistan under the Taliban they are required to do so whether they like them or not, and sometimes are subject to severe penalties when they don't. We in the US are not flawless, but we don't see millions of people risking everything to get to places such as Afghanistan or North Korea!

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Guyverman [2016-03-19 09:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Can I ask a question?

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shitty-glasses-hanji In reply to Guyverman [2016-06-15 05:18:04 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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wadafpenguin [2015-10-24 15:44:50 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful Β  //throws a million flowers//

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Vyctorian In reply to wadafpenguin [2015-12-14 20:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!~

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sabeen675 [2015-09-24 16:08:37 +0000 UTC]

Lovely Poem ........good jobΒ  Β 

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Vyctorian In reply to sabeen675 [2015-09-26 22:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!~

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KaldurxConner [2015-06-29 01:02:51 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.

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Vyctorian In reply to KaldurxConner [2015-06-29 01:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!~

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Robato [2014-11-15 04:47:00 +0000 UTC]

I like her attitude!

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Vyctorian In reply to Robato [2014-11-15 10:38:27 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Robato In reply to Vyctorian [2014-11-16 15:47:47 +0000 UTC]

\m/~d(-_-)b~ rock on.

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Gambargin [2014-07-30 09:37:48 +0000 UTC]

Good writing! I can cartainly capture the image from your words

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Vyctorian In reply to Gambargin [2014-07-31 06:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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gakumi [2014-04-10 10:11:22 +0000 UTC]

omg this iis amazing!! i love it, you write stories pretty well!

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Vyctorian In reply to gakumi [2014-04-10 13:53:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you very much!~

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gakumi In reply to Vyctorian [2014-04-11 13:39:46 +0000 UTC]

youre welcome! i hope to read more of your works!

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Net-Spidy [2014-04-02 02:34:45 +0000 UTC]

It's awesome indeed to see that not everyone takes propagated perspective about Hijab or Islam and tends to have their own point of view about the concerned matter... Stay happy =>

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Vyctorian In reply to Net-Spidy [2014-04-02 02:58:24 +0000 UTC]

Will do Islamophobia/phobia in general is harmful and needs to be exposed to the light and stopped before it can start

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Net-Spidy In reply to Vyctorian [2014-04-02 03:01:17 +0000 UTC]

Will do Islamophobia...??? ;/

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Kinggigasmon [2013-12-10 05:16:41 +0000 UTC]

A wonderful poem! I agree, I've seen many utterly beautiful women wearing headscarves and who also looked very dignified. I like how you did this!

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Vyctorian In reply to Kinggigasmon [2013-12-10 05:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly for saying so, sir.

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ArabPonyHorse [2013-11-28 00:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Wow that was amazing, my friend is muslim and she is welcome in my school and every where she goes. Any one to make fun of people from other places should just shut up and move to another country to be mocked and see how they like it.

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toratoto [2013-11-14 22:45:39 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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Vyctorian In reply to toratoto [2013-11-14 23:49:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RoseSakuraJo83 [2013-02-13 21:06:04 +0000 UTC]

Great piece.
I do respect you. You have enough respect for yourself to try and understand others instead of steriotyping them.

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Vyctorian In reply to RoseSakuraJo83 [2013-02-13 22:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Broeckchen [2012-10-30 03:22:08 +0000 UTC]

This is just beautiful! One can feel the beauty of the woman and her strength glowing from the words. I love it!

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Vyctorian In reply to Broeckchen [2012-10-30 04:14:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh Thank you very much

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Nawaf8 [2012-09-28 09:34:59 +0000 UTC]

You are truly bright minded ^^ I adore what you wrote
And I'm also VERY happy that some respectful people like you still exist

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Vyctorian In reply to Nawaf8 [2012-09-29 02:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Aww, Thank you so much

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Nawaf8 In reply to Vyctorian [2012-09-29 12:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome ^^

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Vyctorian In reply to Nawaf8 [2012-09-29 15:05:52 +0000 UTC]

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bttlrp [2012-09-28 02:47:33 +0000 UTC]

The hijab is beautiful, and women are beautiful! Wear what you like, any decent person will respect you any, anyone who hates or holds prejudice in their heart isn't worth bothering with - it's a crying shame the way in which western culture treats Muslim women who CHOOSE to wear the hijab! To them I say: show some bloody respect!

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Vyctorian In reply to bttlrp [2012-09-28 03:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Agreed, so much. Thank you for the beautiful comment.

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Rosie-chan17 [2012-09-28 01:05:10 +0000 UTC]

I am a Native American, I respect all countries, religions, cultures, etc. I have several friends that are Muslim, and in a year, I will meet my Muslim friend, Reemo, that lives in Cairo, Egypt.

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Vyctorian In reply to Rosie-chan17 [2012-09-28 01:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, It's glad to hear there are more respectful people out there.

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CallMeFarGone [2012-09-23 01:36:57 +0000 UTC]

Respect for other's as living human being.... goes a long long way.

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Vyctorian In reply to CallMeFarGone [2012-09-23 01:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

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SapphireTurquoise [2012-09-18 17:51:45 +0000 UTC]

W0000000000000000W you are such an interesting person!!!!! You are not Muslim but you wrote such a beautiful piece about hijab! I admire your respect and open-mindedness!

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Vyctorian In reply to SapphireTurquoise [2012-09-18 19:26:01 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, Thank you very much, A comment like this means a lot to me

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SapphireTurquoise In reply to Vyctorian [2012-09-18 20:32:53 +0000 UTC]

i am glad bright-minded people like you still exist

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Vyctorian In reply to SapphireTurquoise [2012-09-18 20:47:54 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, you're making me blush :3

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SebastiansSire [2012-09-18 16:57:47 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome and beautiful my friend!! I think this is some of the best poems I ever read.

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Vyctorian In reply to SebastiansSire [2012-09-18 17:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you very much, that means a lot

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rozi123 [2012-09-18 00:41:38 +0000 UTC]

very nice, you are so well aware of this. I really thank you for understanding muslim women.

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Vyctorian In reply to rozi123 [2012-09-18 00:48:26 +0000 UTC]

It was my pleasure, thank you for the comment :3

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After--Life [2012-09-17 22:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Man you are lucky you have Muslims GIRLS in your school.

Not trying to be a perv or anything lol, but when I see a Muslim women practicing Hijab, it gives ME strength as a Muslim and increases my faith, that's why I wish there were legit Muslimas in my school, all we got are half naked girls walkin' in the hallways and guys swaggin' like there's no tomorrow.

Nice poem, I like it very much. Faved.

It's nice to see your Agnostic but admire Hijab.

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Vyctorian In reply to After--Life [2012-09-17 23:36:07 +0000 UTC]

I was referring to the city bus but thank you.

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After--Life In reply to Vyctorian [2012-09-18 00:51:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh rofl, but you're welcome.

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