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Hmmm about the speech bubbles how about changing it as the character emotion changes I think yur manga will improve more with that. Oh yeah! umm I think you should minimize using speedlines in every scene I think it will be better if you will just use the body language of the characters to show whats happening. Try to pt background instead of speedlines I think it will be a lot better. This is a critique from a friend of mine on my drawings and I think he is right. It enhances the way we tell the story in our manga. ^^ Thanks for reading this somewhat long critique
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oh nice 
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You seem to have changed the way you do your speech bubbles. Either that, or I just noticed them. They're really nice - I like the variation of the line thickness you use in them.
I'm not sure if it's just the angle, but the two scars over this guy's left eye seem to be at a different angle in the last box.
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well I do experiment alot with this manga coz I'm still trying to find my own style of doing manga. Thanks for appreciating the changes. expect more of it. I'm still practicing a more refine speech bubble like I see on manga. shout bubble are one of the things I need to work on. for the scars, I don't see anything wrong with it. Anyway, thanks alot 4 checking them
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