thebelderiver27 [2008-05-12 11:46:02 +0000 UTC]
I think the first page did its purpose. i think you'd like to make the readers see the main thing that happening so you did not put a background in it. Well thats what i think ^^ you did a good job here.
- oh my ehrgeiz!!!!that girl is gonna get it bubugbugin ko yun heheh jowk
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