sd-stock [2009-05-17 23:21:51 +0000 UTC]
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I see that you're the photographer, so I'll try to keep my comments based on the photo itself.
You used negative space in a wonderful way. The black on the right side emphasizes the model. Also, you're in a very unique location, combining the ever-popular grunge and checkered floor.
However, what I think you did in post-production is a little strong. The image is too dark on the model's face, making her top half almost disappear into the background, whereas her hips and legs really stand out.
I also wouldn't have classified this as a glamour portrait. Glamour portraits are usually cropped tighter, polished until they shine. This seems to be more fashion oriented, where the focus is on the clothes more than the model.
It is a wonderful image, though, and it catches the eye of the viewer in a strong manner.
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