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Caboose926 [2017-02-25 05:02:02 +0000 UTC]
*Whistle! Whistle!* Hot damn! I like her to be my girlfriend or my OC's girlfriend(if I can successfully make a male OC). I can't take my eyes off her.
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Smashking27 [2016-12-14 21:36:34 +0000 UTC]
Hey! Can we do a RWBY rp or an OC battle between Mary and my OC Sky in notes? I'm quite detailed.
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GweAnakJakarta In reply to SchattenLotus [2016-04-29 13:59:04 +0000 UTC]
well, I don't know whether it's legal/illegal but seeing how RWBY is going for a more mature, darker path, there's a chance there will be characters with such outfits appearing
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LeviathanTheGamer [2015-12-14 23:34:04 +0000 UTC]
HOT. Also, I get the feeling that she'd get along really well with an OC of mine.
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Faranoy [2015-12-13 07:12:42 +0000 UTC]
I feel like she is a bit overpowered. She had no previous training other than joining a gang, and she got into beacon just like that? Where did she even get that weapon?
If she was raped and abused at a young age, why would she wear little clothing? Wouldn't someone abused like her want to cover up as much as possible?
And ' When she is in a battle with a male opponent, she is pretty much unbeatable (unless he can fight with a blindfold)', what if the male is just gay? Or Asexual? Does her semblance work then? Is there any age limit to her semblance?
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Pachumaster In reply to Faranoy [2016-02-27 15:16:59 +0000 UTC]
agreed, I also disagree with the visuals, weapon and costume look 'meh'.
and woudn't she be based on mary magdalene rather than on virgin mary? this was done purely to piss religious people off, which is rather lame
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infamousgang [2015-11-29 08:58:24 +0000 UTC]
she's interesting if I can, can I use her in a story I'm making
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CaptainPrice007 [2015-09-02 14:37:40 +0000 UTC]
Quite the interesting character here. I like her backstory, albeit pretty dark for the RWBY verse, it makes her a little unique in that aspect. I am a little concerned about her abilities with pretty much being unbeatable against male opponents. That seem a little OP in my mind, but hey, your character.
Guess that's good news for my RWBY OC, he would not fall for her charm, haha. Anyway, nice piece of work for an interesting character.
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chbedok [2015-08-29 10:12:08 +0000 UTC]
Unbeatable against a male opponent? I have a character with an advanced suit of armor, and a battalion of 'iron men' ready to prove otherwise.
But in any case, some questions;
Where would a prostitute get an energy lance?
A trained fighter does not necessarily equate to a trained hunter, Ruby got into Beacon after training in Signal for a time. Mary hasn't darkened a school's doorstep since she was born, how did she become good enough to hunt monsters?
My suggestion for a more believable character would be to have her work with Roman instead. Maybe as a personal protege of his? And have Mary's gang a part of Roman's organisation, which would allow for a chance of interaction between Roman and Mary. Her team members are members of her gang and together, they rob rich guys to help poor girls like themselves.
That's just my opinion tho.
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LeviathanTheGamer [2015-08-19 17:02:24 +0000 UTC]
I don't know why, but I'm getting a really big Fire Emblem vibe from her.
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Pokemon1ranger1Airt [2015-06-06 19:54:32 +0000 UTC]
Can I use this character in my comic? I'll give you full credit.
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Despon [2015-05-29 12:49:32 +0000 UTC]
"When she is in a battle with a male opponent, she is pretty much unbeatable (unless he can fight with a blindfold)."
That seems a little presumptuous.
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d61 [2015-03-16 06:47:01 +0000 UTC]
Wow, not holding back on the back story are you. Still great character non the less. can't wait to see more
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JettErebus [2014-10-15 05:16:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow...just....Wow She is dynamite!! XD
Jett Erebus: Where have she been all my life!!!! Finally! Another person who is like me!^3^! -tear- She is just perfect, and revealing. X) She brings joy in my dark soul. ^^"
ok...sorry about that, my perverted OC Jett is always crazy about women. But really, she looks awesome!! Can't wait to see more of her and her team!! ^u^
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JettErebus In reply to warhippie56 [2014-10-16 05:26:44 +0000 UTC]
Jett:" -grin- No milady, thank you hehe *sigh* Now I know I'm gonna have good dreams! ^^"
Teehee your very welcome!!^3^
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ZeroKnight0304 [2014-10-14 22:13:37 +0000 UTC]
*nosebleeds and dies due to how beautiful this is*
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Ryanator50 [2014-09-14 02:53:19 +0000 UTC]
What team is she the leader of?
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warhippie56 In reply to Ryanator50 [2014-09-14 03:09:44 +0000 UTC]
Im not finished with the team yet. Im still working on it.
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AeroTatsu01 [2014-08-29 21:26:37 +0000 UTC]
Hm, among all the OC's I have seen around for RWBY, this one stands out to me in some ways. If you ask why, I probably wouldn't be able to tell you why, she just does. XD
But after reading all of her information, I must say, she is very well done for an OC. I can't see which of either her personality, backstory, or fighting style, stood out most, they were all well done and quite clever.
Heh, though I will have to say, against my boy Aero, she would find he is one man she will not be able to have an easy time against, nor would she be able to rip him apart from his girlfriend Rosalind. XD He's not exactly like other men, cause perversion is something he rather detests.
Heh, I don't mean to say that as, he's better than that, beyond that, she can't beat him, I just thought it'd be interesting to see how they would far in a one on one match. XD
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ZeroKnight0304 [2014-08-29 13:34:57 +0000 UTC]
very revealing *nose bleeds and I die*
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BlackTemplar124 [2014-08-17 00:59:35 +0000 UTC]
Is it bad I have a feeling that if she were to meet Cardin he'd make a joke on her surname? (Anael is pronounced similarly to Anal iirc)
Also, lemme take a wild guess for the other three team members:
Pride, Wrath, Envy?
In any case, I like the character. Interesting backstory and design.
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warhippie56 In reply to BlackTemplar124 [2014-08-17 01:07:33 +0000 UTC]
Lol, actually anael is pronounced like azrael except with a "n" instead of a "zr" and Cardin wouldn't make fun of her, she's too hawt. Glad you like her though.
As for the last 2 characters I'm debating between envy, wrath, or greed
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ZacTheMangaManiac [2014-08-17 00:53:29 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work, love the backstory and personality you have with her, as well as the theme.
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FH47 [2014-08-16 21:33:44 +0000 UTC]
They all sound pretty cool. Well done
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warhippie56 In reply to FH47 [2014-08-16 21:39:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ! Can't wait to work on other OCs!
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FH47 In reply to warhippie56 [2014-08-16 21:48:59 +0000 UTC]
The 4 are a team right? If so, whats their team name?
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warhippie56 In reply to FH47 [2014-08-16 21:52:42 +0000 UTC]
No they're not a team. The first two I created were ones that I did a long time ago that I dropped. I'll make another two for the 2nd team.
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FH47 In reply to warhippie56 [2014-08-16 21:54:09 +0000 UTC]
Aww Cecilia was pretty cool though
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warhippie56 In reply to FH47 [2014-08-16 21:58:44 +0000 UTC]
I might draw a redesign for all my old characters.
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elezya [2014-08-15 12:09:55 +0000 UTC]
i would just 2 word to describe this... EPIC and AWESOME!
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warhippie56 In reply to elezya [2014-08-15 16:32:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Glad You Liked it.
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AlexanderCyan [2014-08-15 08:59:04 +0000 UTC]
God damn....I feel sorry for any man going against her. (and the few girls that swing that way) Her back story is defiantly one that truly made her stand out along with different and interesting personality . I think I may keep an eye on the progress you make with Mary. Your back story was very well done, it really brings her to life along with your other oc's nicely done.
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warhippie56 In reply to DGsilv3r [2014-08-15 16:46:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. Can't wait to expand on this character! Oh and thank you for being my first watcher!
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DGsilv3r In reply to warhippie56 [2014-08-15 18:27:55 +0000 UTC]
It is madness that I'm the only one!
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