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Ming-GID [2015-09-24 14:48:25 +0000 UTC]
I didn't see u put my pic in your fanfic
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WarlockFictioner In reply to Ming-GID [2015-09-24 15:04:11 +0000 UTC]
Sorry. Im been working. Then, I havent updated it. I'll do it soon.
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xtcgm [2015-08-25 12:06:06 +0000 UTC]
Sorry I couldn't finish the sub-ed properly. Normal service should return next week.
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JasonMasters [2015-08-25 02:52:45 +0000 UTC]
The ending could do with some work. It's not clear enough what's going on or what's happened at that point. But overall it's a good story.
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WarlockFictioner In reply to JasonMasters [2015-08-25 03:23:04 +0000 UTC]
Well, thank you some much. I didn't like the final either. But I'm gonna do the second part, too. Which was your favorite part?
I'm a fan of your writting.
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JasonMasters In reply to WarlockFictioner [2015-08-25 04:05:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm not a fan of the violence, but I can see that it was probably necessary to the story. The parts I like best are (of course) the bondage, followed by the rescue. That's one reason I didn't like the ending... because it practically left out the dramatic rescue altogether.
And I so want the aggressor in this story to get what's coming to him.
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WarlockFictioner In reply to JasonMasters [2015-08-25 06:56:44 +0000 UTC]
Did I use some violence? I didn't think that. Ha-ha
Well. The agresor is short but too aggressive. If I thought I didn't put some violence. Doing that, it's gonna be more violent.
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JasonMasters In reply to WarlockFictioner [2015-08-25 08:48:33 +0000 UTC]
A kick in the balls counts as violence for sure. Technically, I guess tying someone up against their will also counts but I'm making a distinction just because.
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WarlockFictioner In reply to JasonMasters [2015-08-25 14:39:07 +0000 UTC]
Hey. Don't try to make me be the evil. I told you the villain of the story is really a baddie.
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JasonMasters In reply to WarlockFictioner [2015-08-25 14:47:06 +0000 UTC]
That wasn't my intention. I fully understand that you have to write the character "in character" because I do some writing too.
That also applies to whether or not the "baddie" in the story gets punished.
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WarlockFictioner In reply to JasonMasters [2015-08-25 14:53:59 +0000 UTC]
I'm following the manga story. I wanted the villian pays for that, too. Don't worry. I'm not happy with the story that all. But I enjoyed writing it. I have seen your job too. It's awesome.
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JasonMasters In reply to WarlockFictioner [2015-08-26 02:41:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
But a little note about the English language. "Job" and "Work" are similar in meaning but you've used the wrong one in this context. "Job" implies that something is regular employment for which one is usually paid (unless "job" is used euphemistically, but that's a whole different discussion). "Work" can imply employment (it can be a "job") but it can also mean anything which requires (or required) particular effort or particular skill, or the result of that effort or skill. It does not have to imply employment the way "job" usually does.
In this context, "work" is the correct word. I hope you don't mind my pointing this out.
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