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Camarokid82 [2011-08-05 04:44:44 +0000 UTC]
I love this Josh character you have.
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Camarokid82 In reply to WarriorNick [2011-08-06 00:23:57 +0000 UTC]
Thats because the only difference between me and Josh is that I'm straight and he's bisexual.
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WarriorNick In reply to Camarokid82 [2011-08-06 00:48:44 +0000 UTC]
Well, that's great to hear, but his sexual preference is beside the point. It's not a plot point so much as Nick's is, and nothing ever gets off the ground concerning it. You can ignore it entirely.
Do you have any comments about his personality, his flaws, etc? I was told Josh is a favorite among my readers actually, hence why I included him in Imperil.
What do you like/dislike about him, basically? I'm curious now.
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He's been improved since Zener, but he gets much less screen time as a drawback. I'm working to correct that.
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Camarokid82 In reply to WarriorNick [2011-08-06 01:09:45 +0000 UTC]
I know and I'm not bothered by it either.
I haven't noticed any flaws yet. But I will say he seems a little soft.
I like how he wasn't afraid to cry in front of anyone but I hate seeing him take the easy way out of trouble.
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WarriorNick In reply to Camarokid82 [2011-08-06 01:29:19 +0000 UTC]
I should mention right now the villains are NOT written well. And since he is a part of them now... that might affect things in the future.
Anyway, about the crying thing, he did it a fair bit in his background. (Given the fact he has one of the most depressing back stories I ever came up with, it's understandable.) He is very soft and easy to hurt, but since he's still a young Raichu (and never does become an adult), that's kinda the drawback to him right now. I had to tone down his anger issues from the first novel though.
Yeah, it sucks he takes the easy way out. That's another thing I need to correct... (Thankfully Navy never does that option. geez.)
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Camarokid82 In reply to WarriorNick [2011-08-06 04:01:32 +0000 UTC]
I actually liked how he was in the first novel. but one of my characters has a pretty depressing backstory as well. She's sorta the same way as Josh.
It's kinda funny how my Raichu, Snyper, always likes messing with people when they have him cornered then he always manages to escape.
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starrgrl24 [2011-04-07 02:57:32 +0000 UTC]
(I gotta play catch up again. >.> ) Anyways, it is very interesting how you ended it. I get the feeling that Josh may just be a "pawn" in all this, but that is just my prediction. I really shouldn't underestimate Hollander's intelligence. He really is making quite a challenge to the protagonists. There is simply just more and more suspense. I do admire how you just keep building it up...makes me wanna keep my eyes glued to the screen.
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