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Washington118 β€” Shadow Story part 1
Published: 2011-12-21 07:39:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 174; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description Audio Message.
Sender: Jesse-S118 AKA Trainee Washington.
Recipient: [Hidden for security]
August 16, 2528

"Hello? Is this thing working? Ok, I'm just going to assume it is. Anyway, hi [name hidden], how's life back on Earth doing? I'm great, I just arrived and I'm already part of a squad of three. Don't worry about me, I'll be just fine. Just remember to keep studying, get enough sleep, and make sure you keep yourself safe. Anyway, thanks for pushing me to do this, I know you wouldn't want me to do this if I would be in any life-threatening danger, but just remember that we won't see each other in a while. Alright, well I better get some sleep before I start my training in the morning. Remember that I'll always love you. I'll try to send another message as soon as I can… So by for now…"

Jesse lay back in his chair after sending his message. He let out a sigh as he rubbed the back of his neck, clearly tired after all he had done today. He had been inducted into the Freelancer Trainee program, met his teammates and Team Leaders, Agents Washington and Texas, and had to run across the compound to the dorm he shared with one of his teammates. He walked over to his bunk and looked out the large glass window to the night sky of Planet Reach and stared at the stars. He then crawled into bed to prepare himself for the hard troubles he would soon face tomorrow.
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Comments: 14

Darrtaa [2011-12-21 07:43:41 +0000 UTC]

I'm already interested.

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Washington118 In reply to Darrtaa [2011-12-21 07:46:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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Darrtaa In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 07:50:20 +0000 UTC]

If I were to suggest anything, it would be to try and flesh out Maine a bit when he shows up.

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Washington118 In reply to Darrtaa [2011-12-21 17:00:05 +0000 UTC]

flesh out? what does that mean?

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Darrtaa In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 18:16:57 +0000 UTC]

Like make him more than just a rampaging monster (obviously that's what he becomes/what he's really damn good at being); was he that one recruit that didn't talk to anyone, did he start fights with everyone, was he actually a completely different person before he started the program?

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Washington118 In reply to Darrtaa [2011-12-21 18:23:00 +0000 UTC]

...are you not paying attention? he's not a recruit. He's teaching the recruits along with the other freelancers, Washington, Texas, York, Carolina and the others. And obviously before he was shot in the throught.

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Darrtaa In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 18:26:56 +0000 UTC]

I clearly missed that part, my bad!

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Washington118 In reply to Darrtaa [2011-12-21 18:39:13 +0000 UTC]

You should read more carfully. After all, this story takes place well befor my first story.

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Darrtaa In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 20:06:38 +0000 UTC]

THAT I did pick up on

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Washington118 In reply to Darrtaa [2011-12-21 21:47:59 +0000 UTC]

really? i didn't say anything in the story that would have mentioned that.

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RainySecret [2011-12-21 07:42:16 +0000 UTC]

wow! that's a great start! very sweet!

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Washington118 In reply to RainySecret [2011-12-21 07:46:54 +0000 UTC]

sweet? how so? how is it sweet?

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RainySecret In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 17:58:18 +0000 UTC]

The message home. I can't wait to read the rest.

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Washington118 In reply to RainySecret [2011-12-21 18:24:02 +0000 UTC]

oh, well im working on more of it as im typing this message. So, more of it will be posted soon.

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