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Darrtaa [2011-12-21 07:43:41 +0000 UTC]
I'm already interested.
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Darrtaa In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 07:50:20 +0000 UTC]
If I were to suggest anything, it would be to try and flesh out Maine a bit when he shows up.
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Washington118 In reply to Darrtaa [2011-12-21 17:00:05 +0000 UTC]
flesh out? what does that mean?
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Darrtaa In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 18:16:57 +0000 UTC]
Like make him more than just a rampaging monster (obviously that's what he becomes/what he's really damn good at being); was he that one recruit that didn't talk to anyone, did he start fights with everyone, was he actually a completely different person before he started the program?
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Washington118 In reply to Darrtaa [2011-12-21 18:23:00 +0000 UTC]
...are you not paying attention? he's not a recruit. He's teaching the recruits along with the other freelancers, Washington, Texas, York, Carolina and the others. And obviously before he was shot in the throught.
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Darrtaa In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 18:26:56 +0000 UTC]
I clearly missed that part, my bad!
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Washington118 In reply to Darrtaa [2011-12-21 18:39:13 +0000 UTC]
You should read more carfully. After all, this story takes place well befor my first story.
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Darrtaa In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 20:06:38 +0000 UTC]
THAT I did pick up on
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Washington118 In reply to Darrtaa [2011-12-21 21:47:59 +0000 UTC]
really? i didn't say anything in the story that would have mentioned that.
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RainySecret [2011-12-21 07:42:16 +0000 UTC]
wow! that's a great start! very sweet!
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RainySecret In reply to Washington118 [2011-12-21 17:58:18 +0000 UTC]
The message home. I can't wait to read the rest.
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Washington118 In reply to RainySecret [2011-12-21 18:24:02 +0000 UTC]
oh, well im working on more of it as im typing this message. So, more of it will be posted soon.
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