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Published: 2002-11-02 09:11:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 190; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 23
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in each others arms andpretending we don't know the truth
close but not close enough and
there's no key to the lock on
our cages that keep hold of
desires and the unthinkable deeds
that are required for complete happiness
finishing actions instead of hiding from them.
difficulty breathing not so much because of
respitory, but because of the
fear freezing movement
ice seems to shatter as hand touches skin
calm the shaking and melt as eyes open and
take a piece of me as lids shut again.
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Comments: 8
You did a great job sharing and expressing your feelings,
I like that, and agree.
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I felt weird after reading this... but in a good way....
You share here really interesting moments and your poetry give them all their power... this is incredible
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the poem definity holds the ideas of uncertainty of what you know, hehe contridicting in curves. the shakes and ice is the best part to me its captured just right. I.. just adore it.
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I don't know which one i like more, this one or the last one. This is yet another poem bursting with feeling. The calming warmth of someone...with a twist. Sems like a classic idea exposed into a wasted emotion kind of feeling. You did a great job expressing and sharing your feelings, making the reader feel and snes what you feel and sense. just incredible.
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