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Published: 2004-03-21 14:49:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 217; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 39
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Please... please, give me sanctuary... help me, please But no one answeredStock:
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Very dramatic and powerful...I love the message here
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hehe nice work! the butterflys result really well!
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I didn't bother reading over anyone's comment so pardon me if I am reiterating someone else's opinion. In terms of a composition, it is clever and original. For completiong however, i think you might like to desaturate, burn, and dodge certain elements to bring the moths into a more believable stance in the picture. Also moths would scatter, not necessarily all follow the leader (if that's the effect you wanted then pardon me for not seeing it). Try rotating and scaling them and see if that adds to the depth. One last comment I'll put up in the form of a question...do you like all that space between the girl and the moths (same with the upper right and lower left corners)? If not, how could you fill it or use it?
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this is going to be a long spring break, lol
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I agree with cropping it, but I don't think you should add anything. It could get too cluttered, and the emotion won't come across in the picture.
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well, that depends on which version you saw... the butterfly-less one, or this one...
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i's like i can feel her pain through my computer. i think that maybe you should crop it, there is too much empty space.
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It looks nice, finished or no. 
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i think it does look rather complete, myself, but if theres more you wanted to do with it... hehe
as is though i really like it.. a good idea, indeed!
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humm i like the pain she felts.. ! great work dear!
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thank you hon! 
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