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wave-lens — 29 'Gasp, Gasp, Gasp.'

Published: 2014-07-25 02:47:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 11966; Favourites: 69; Downloads: 139
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Description Did we make it?

Yes we did - though I didn't quite remember how.
My limbs were all weak, and noting how my pose was - body laid lamely against the slippery rocks and legs wading in the shallow water - I was sure that Michiru had helped me up and had saved me from drowning.
In the dim tranquil light, I saw Michiru gasping like a fish, her breasts heaving heavily and her mouth agape coughing out water. As for myself, I was already breathing fairly ok, thanks to Michiru, but my throat and nostrils ached terribly and overall I felt very weary and lightheaded.

"Wel, welcome to my cove, my Liege. Cough. Cough."
....Michiru, are you okay?
"Yes. Sorry, according to Protocol, cough, I had to bring you safer and more comfortable. I, am, truly, sorry. Cough."
....It's okay. Let's try to catch our breath first.
"You are very kind, my Liege. It's that, I'm not a fully grown mermaid. I can, swim, underwater for only about four and a half minutes max. But with more practice and growth, I should be able to serve you better."
Uh...uh-huh.
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Comments: 14

Deathedd [2022-12-23 00:23:47 +0000 UTC]

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PascalOfPiers [2014-08-03 22:30:22 +0000 UTC]

About time they left the water XD.

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RIP-Blue-Galewind [2014-07-26 03:26:44 +0000 UTC]

Barely arrived unscathed, that was a very close call for them! Still, quite a great risk they both took based on chance!



Now, that is what I call true suspense at work! You did well to absolutely keep the audience watching what would happen! I look forward to seeing more too!

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D0minatus [2014-07-26 00:47:34 +0000 UTC]

More more!

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WanderingGentleman [2014-07-25 14:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Phew.... I am relieved...

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aniviod2904 [2014-07-25 04:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Michiru's secret grotto... ^^ neat!

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YoumuNepLowell [2014-07-25 04:08:49 +0000 UTC]

Uh... 4 and a half? You serious!? That long?

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Twogadia In reply to YoumuNepLowell [2014-07-25 09:04:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the best free divers can hold for more than 10 minutes.

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BoboMagroto [2014-07-25 04:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Yay! You both made it!

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cesaralexis [2014-07-25 03:27:20 +0000 UTC]

BUT WHO IS SHE?

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cesaralexis [2014-07-25 03:26:43 +0000 UTC]

LOVELEY

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Joey245 [2014-07-25 03:21:56 +0000 UTC]

YAY, THEY LIVED!!!

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dragonaur [2014-07-25 03:00:02 +0000 UTC]

The secret grotto.

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Twogadia [2014-07-25 02:58:25 +0000 UTC]

This is a great story!

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