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wavethehedgehog — Sonic the Manga pg1

Published: 2004-09-15 01:19:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Description Yep. This comic reads RIGHT to LEFT format. Please dont say it makes no sense if you read it wrong...XD;
=3 Yep page two is next.
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Comments: 5

Pachamac [2004-09-15 15:49:49 +0000 UTC]

I can undertsnad it quite easily, and I must congratulate you on a fantastic page so far.
However, there are some things I'd like to point out. One is that, from the get go of your comic, and other comic, it's hard to undertsnad what is really going to transpire. Just a fight between Sonic and Shadow? I must say, however, this makes for an interesting, and curious storyline.
Another thing that could be a point to consider, is backgrounds. It's hard to see where this is taking place... I assume on a street, due to the curb and path, but it would be easier if more backgrounds were introduced, such as the second panel being a great choice to add in.

Btw, what happened to Wave's comic?

All in all, this is a fantastic page, and I can't wait to see what else you produce.

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wavethehedgehog In reply to Pachamac [2004-09-15 20:23:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for such a helpful comment! =3
Yeah, I have problems drawing backgrounds in because i try to avoid the negative space. But, im glad you said that. Ill try and add in backgrounds on the next page.

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Pachamac In reply to wavethehedgehog [2004-09-15 20:25:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it was a helpful comment, and didn't seem more like a nagging or negative comment. To be honest, I sometimes find backgrounds hard to draw, but they certainly make a storyline and comic much more interesting. I can't wait. ^^

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wavethehedgehog In reply to Pachamac [2004-09-15 20:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, its difficult for me to draw certian backgrounds cause ive never seen them or I dont live there. Thats why its hard to tell where my comic starts off...XD;

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Pachamac In reply to wavethehedgehog [2004-09-15 20:42:16 +0000 UTC]

I agree. It's hard to draw various areas of backgrounds of places that you haven't seen before. Either way, I usually use comic books as inspirations on what a place would probably look like. Failing that, I use Google to search for images.

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