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wellgraphic In reply to Ena11 [2010-01-15 18:45:18 +0000 UTC]
Now i have changed it a bit.
I maked the snow brighter and all around the arrow.
Was that what you think?
Any better?
Thanks!
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gppr [2010-01-15 18:13:18 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely composed shot. I like the subject's intricacies and the detail showing on it. The texture is great.
The blue represents the cold well, however, I think the blue area is a little big, which flattens the image a little. Perhaps brightening a few sections of the snow selectively could work to enhance this image.
I hope this is helpful to you.
#GimmeFeedback
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wellgraphic In reply to gppr [2010-01-15 18:45:05 +0000 UTC]
Now i have changed it a bit.
I maked the snow brighter and all around the arrow.
Was that what you think?
Any better?
Thanks!
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gppr In reply to wellgraphic [2010-01-15 19:18:21 +0000 UTC]
Yes it is better, yet, I think the brightest parts of the snow should be close to white. The nuances of blue would still keep the cool feeling, but a little more contrast could be nice.
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wellgraphic In reply to Ena11 [2010-01-15 18:05:41 +0000 UTC]
Yepp i agree totally with you.
And i will try to make the contrast better in the background and the snow whiter.
Do you want me to tell you when i've changed it, and then you can check back?
Thanks a lot for giving me your great feedback.
Keep looking
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Nordica93 [2010-01-15 17:56:42 +0000 UTC]
Rating: 4 out of 5
The detail on the texture of the arrow is superb, and the focus is clear enough that one can make out the individual shapes of the snowflakes. However, towards the bottom of the arrow the picture becomes slightly blurry, and I also feel that there could be more of a contrast between the subject and the background (perhaps you could brighten up the snow?)
But still, an interesting and solid effort.
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wellgraphic In reply to Nordica93 [2010-01-15 18:05:37 +0000 UTC]
Yepp i agree totally with you.
And i will try to make the contrast better in the background and the snow whiter.
Do you want me to tell you when i've changed it, and then you can check back?
Thanks a lot for giving me your great feedback.
Keep looking
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Nordica93 In reply to wellgraphic [2010-01-15 19:16:26 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I would love to check back on your work once you've made the adjustments. Have fun!
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Nordica93 In reply to wellgraphic [2010-01-15 23:08:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow, it looks even better now. The picture seems much clearer and crisper.
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wellgraphic In reply to wellgraphic [2010-01-15 18:44:45 +0000 UTC]
Now i have changed it a bit.
I maked the snow brighter and all around the arrow.
Was that what you think?
Any better?
Thanks!
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BeatingDeadHeroes [2010-01-15 14:20:20 +0000 UTC]
Wow. I'm not much of a photographer myself, so I can't really nitpick this too much, but your composition is very nice. It's an excellent capture of those fine little snow crystals, but I do agree with one of the above posters that it could use a little lightening up, just for contrast.
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hEyJude4 [2010-01-15 12:14:45 +0000 UTC]
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I think your focus is spot-on. However, it does look a little dark. The arrow itself is fine, but I think it might look better if you brightened up the snow.
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wellgraphic In reply to hEyJude4 [2010-01-15 12:17:51 +0000 UTC]
aha okey, But then the snow will be less blurry i think, maybe i can try it.
thanks for your feedback!
Keep watchin
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ArtByRiana [2010-01-15 04:59:56 +0000 UTC]
This is an amazing photo. I love the combination of the focused arrow with all those details and the bits of ice and the blurry background. It has a very interesting mood to it. Great job!
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gfinch [2010-01-04 15:31:36 +0000 UTC]
Increddible focus here! Its great, so clear! I like it a lot! For me the colours all seem to work as well. I like this a lot, great work!!
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