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SoliDeoGloria1999 [2014-06-17 23:09:42 +0000 UTC]
May i give you some adviceΒ
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SoliDeoGloria1999 In reply to werewolftg [2014-06-17 23:19:00 +0000 UTC]
When your doing a story in the description dont say "as he blah blah as she blah blah" saying as in every sentence can get the reader bored the storys good but try to change your wording other than "as..."
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