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WestlyLaFleur — The Green Lancer Comic - Installment #2
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Published: 2017-08-01 01:15:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1319; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 5
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A continuation of 'The Green Lancer', which was my first-ever attempt at writing a comic. Leave me feedback or encouragement if you like. I hope you're excited for more, since I'm planning on making more. Share it with your friends and tag me in stuff?#greenlancercomic
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Comments: 20
The colors, shapes, and style look great, and there's one thing that caught my attention the most.
In the second row, left panel, the helmet decorations on the Lancer's head look like ears being pointed backward, in submission or fear, which is totally gone by the next panel when he's all, "bish, I got this, and u don' know. STFU or dead."
I realize that is not the theme and tone you're going for, but I'm pretty sure everything I'm seeing is through a caffeine-fueled haze, so that's how it is at this moment.
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It's fine however you choose to interpret it. I'm just happy anybody is reading this to be perfectly honest.
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I really dig the color palette you have going on, the Lancer himself pops just enough against the more muted colors to be easy to see but not too bright to look out of place. You also write some engaging, thought provoking, dialogue and manage to pack it all in perfect place within one page which is impressive. Most people either cram too much in or not enough, but you've got balance. :>
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The arrangement is so difficult. But I'm glad you like what I've got so far. Look forward to more.
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Most certainly will be! :>
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The pacing of the comic is nice and easy to read!
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Thanks, I'm glad you had an easy time with it.
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I'm liking the pacing of the panels you have there. One might think that Green Lancer's monologue would slow the speed down and disrupt the flow, but I think doing this could slow the reader down so that the dire mood could be absorbed. Looking forward to see what dat green lancer boi will be up to.
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I'm glad there's something to like about it.
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I find the lack of apples in this comic concerning. But nice yeti.
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They're in the oven. The pie will be ready in ~ 15 minutes.
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I expect it to be Keto friendly.
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Wow this looks really interesting! So the premise is like a lone warrior who seeks to right wrongs kinda like a hero or vigilante of sorts?
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You'll be finding out soon, hopefully.
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Really like the sense of scale in these panels! Looking forward to more!
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