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WGFayMuse β€” Edward's Regret
Published: 2007-02-12 23:20:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 5039; Favourites: 114; Downloads: 19
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Description As I run away
I glance back
To you shaking and crying
From my verbal attack
Regret fills my mind
As I think of all the pain
I've caused to one so kind
But I can't think of the past
It doesn't matter now
It wasn't meant to last

Time passes by
With only memories of you
I see your face
Not knowing what to do
I think of returning,
Of coming back
But my guilt's burning
How could I ever believe
That you'd want me
After I made you grieve

As I fall into despair
I'm all alone
Nothing to stop me
From a cry or a moan
It's just too bad
That death doesn't come
But I guess I should be glad
Without me,
You are safe and can become
What you're meant to be

But my will is breaking
And dark news comes to ear
I am stunned
Overtaken by my fear
You've left me
And although I wish
It could not be
The truth begins to dawn
Death rushes to mind
I can not go on
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Comments: 54

WGFayMuse In reply to ??? [2009-03-24 21:37:58 +0000 UTC]

AWW! I'm so glad that it moved you that much

Thanx for the fav!

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polskadupa123 [2009-01-31 00:04:56 +0000 UTC]

it sounds more like breaking dawn

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6feetOver [2008-11-25 19:37:34 +0000 UTC]

OMG awesome!! Did anyone see the movie last Friday? I didn't... my friend was supposed to prepay for tickets since I'm broke, but she didn't Oh well, I'm going this friday so it's all good!

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Cro-Magnum [2008-10-21 13:09:29 +0000 UTC]

absolutely beautiful. wat a bummer theres going to be NO Midnight Sun. i cried and cried wen Edward left in New Moon. and i dont cry often.



> i thought i had found my "Masochistic Lion" but i was wrong.
i am not allowed to be happy ;(

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Panda-L [2008-10-02 23:42:44 +0000 UTC]

I agree with a Edward POV Twilight because half the time I was tearing my hair out going "WTF are you thinking?!?!?!" XD

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darkmoogle121 [2008-09-02 21:39:55 +0000 UTC]

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
<333
you're very good!!

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WGFayMuse In reply to darkmoogle121 [2008-09-20 23:00:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Please check out my other stuff (if you'd like to)

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llama984 [2008-08-26 21:42:23 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE this! You really didn't put any spoilers in it ^^
I had my friend read it who's in the middle of reading new moon and it frustrated her to no end XD
I keep teasing her with snippets of info >:3
this is really well written, good job ^^

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WGFayMuse In reply to llama984 [2008-09-20 23:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

You might want to check out my other stuff as well

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llama984 In reply to WGFayMuse [2008-09-27 04:24:45 +0000 UTC]

^^ I'll try, but I don't get on DA very often
busy with college "work" and all that jazz
But I'll check it out next time I have a chance ^^

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inlove-andlonelii [2008-08-12 05:28:30 +0000 UTC]

kyaaahhh! It's shOo shOo sadd....;____; *sniff* whyy dOes he havee tO leavee!! *sniff*

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XXheheXX [2008-08-01 20:33:04 +0000 UTC]

wow this is awsome omg Breaking Dawn is out 2marrow i cant wait *breaks into Borders and reads whole book*

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EdwardCullendFans [2008-07-25 18:25:33 +0000 UTC]

i love it!! join the EdwardCullenFans club if you like!

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SolarEclipse5 [2008-07-24 03:30:58 +0000 UTC]

that was so sad. I cried when Edward left Bella, I felt her pain. I thought Stephenie Meyer wus writing new moon, eclipse, nd breaking dawn for Edward's POV

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devilbaby6606 [2008-06-17 05:58:25 +0000 UTC]

*gasps* THIS AMAZING!

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alicecullenroxx [2008-06-13 21:35:32 +0000 UTC]

amazing! there isnt enough good twilight poetry out there.

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Bellarakel15 [2008-06-13 17:20:49 +0000 UTC]

well before i say anything...
dude you made ME cry..
people usually think of me as a
stone hearted person...
so be happy to be the first person(and i hope the last)
to make me cry...
anyway...awesome it was beatiful to be sincere...
ive read all the books and well i cant wait for breaking dawn...

anyway bout the song almost lover
it has Edward Cullen written all over it...
im listining to it right now..and its true...
what you said bout it...
anyway...i really like the literature i guess i should say...

so see ya..

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FallShadowAngel [2008-05-14 19:19:54 +0000 UTC]

shes not writing one to new moon??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!! *twithes on the floor* NO that would be the perfect thing because we dont know the whole story behind what he did while he was away.!!gfkdfljgkgdljkhfgdkkn k * bangs head on keyboard*

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Oshumi [2008-05-14 18:41:15 +0000 UTC]

ta fantΓ‘stico!

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anaivy12 [2008-04-17 23:10:59 +0000 UTC]

wow. i loved this.
it made me cry
great job
i wish i could write like that.

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WGFayMuse In reply to anaivy12 [2008-04-18 02:40:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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Ifeelyourpain [2008-04-06 20:08:03 +0000 UTC]

I could cry!!

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EternalSunshine22 [2008-03-28 05:36:59 +0000 UTC]

I like it very much.
I think i t portrays Edwards side and point of view very well.
Good Job!!!

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WGFayMuse In reply to EternalSunshine22 [2008-03-28 21:44:55 +0000 UTC]

thanx!

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Jaschli [2008-03-16 21:02:16 +0000 UTC]

Its wonderful...
Now i'm crying
Uii and Almost Lover by A Fine Frenzy is great!!

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WildWolfGirl [2008-02-13 17:14:24 +0000 UTC]

ironically, i was listening to a song someone thought would fit with New Moon when Edward leaves, so it gave the poem an even better atmosphere. I love it. Instant fav!

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TsukikotheServal In reply to WildWolfGirl [2008-03-13 04:58:44 +0000 UTC]

What song?

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WildWolfGirl In reply to TsukikotheServal [2008-03-13 18:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Almost Lover by A Fine Frenzy

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TsukikotheServal In reply to WildWolfGirl [2008-03-13 20:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow the music on it is pretty. whoever said it fits was right.

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WildWolfGirl In reply to TsukikotheServal [2008-03-15 16:31:30 +0000 UTC]

that's what i thought ^.^

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TsukikotheServal In reply to WildWolfGirl [2008-03-16 19:34:17 +0000 UTC]

A lot of the songs on the CD match Bella and Edward. *got it last night* << >>

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WildWolfGirl In reply to TsukikotheServal [2008-03-17 19:01:31 +0000 UTC]

you got the A Fine Frenzy CD?? lol^.^

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TsukikotheServal In reply to WildWolfGirl [2008-03-18 01:08:00 +0000 UTC]

YESH! and I lurvs it.

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WildWolfGirl In reply to TsukikotheServal [2008-03-18 19:06:26 +0000 UTC]

lol.

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angel1901 [2007-11-26 02:20:29 +0000 UTC]

that's REALLY good. would you mind if i borrowed it?
angel1901

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WGFayMuse In reply to angel1901 [2007-11-29 21:49:02 +0000 UTC]

actually i would. I'm not trying to be mean but I don't like it when people use my work.

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EmmaRoseStrange [2007-09-17 21:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this made me want to cry. That's saying a lot. Lol.

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ItsumoMe [2007-08-05 22:43:41 +0000 UTC]

awesome! thats how i imagined it to! I lurv twilight and new moon! cant wait for the next one,right!?

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xcheekii-chiicax [2007-07-16 04:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Aww...thats really gd. I lurrrve the twilight series. With a capitol L and U and R...yeah.. etc etc. anyways, i cnt wait for eclipse!! august 7th!! this is really really gd!!

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tapeistheshiz [2007-07-15 07:11:55 +0000 UTC]

uhm.
actually. :]
this is beautiful, btw.
but you are wrong!
there is a sequel to New Moon called Eclipse coming out August 6th
and then a sequel to that coming out in October.
and THEN she's also rewriting the first book in edward's point of view.

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HotPinkNightmares [2007-04-06 06:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely. I love this.

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WGFayMuse In reply to HotPinkNightmares [2007-04-07 18:03:58 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Captainkoala-7 [2007-03-30 03:51:36 +0000 UTC]

i know... actually, i think emmett probably called him 'eddie' once.
only once.... hmm, i wonder what edward would have done to him... >
i'd feel sorry for emmett.

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Captainkoala-7 [2007-03-29 01:22:36 +0000 UTC]

awww poor edward! the last verse thingy is sooo sad! (I've always wondered; has anybody ever referred edward as 'eddie'? that would be so weird!)
Anyway, this is very true. Poor Eddie... lol jk.
Poor Edward. In every bit as much agony as bella.

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WGFayMuse In reply to Captainkoala-7 [2007-03-29 20:45:42 +0000 UTC]

lol

nah. I think Edward would eat any person who called him "Eddie" *shudder*. He's too awesome to be called Eddie anyway.

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healercub92 [2007-02-15 12:12:08 +0000 UTC]

you did give it away.....I HAVN'T READ THE BOOK YET!!ARGG

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WGFayMuse In reply to healercub92 [2007-02-16 00:33:50 +0000 UTC]

srry-though i didn't give away the ending or any other details, i can promise you that

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WGFayMuse In reply to WGFayMuse [2007-02-16 21:43:56 +0000 UTC]

thanx

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healercub92 In reply to WGFayMuse [2007-02-16 12:59:41 +0000 UTC]

good...i freeking love your avatar.

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Chararwen [2007-02-12 23:23:07 +0000 UTC]

that's very nice...I'm actually feeling that way right now. I wrote a poem about the same thing sort of...except it doesn't sound anything like that. lol

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