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WhatAmItoYou — Lovely Personality
Published: 2011-09-29 01:27:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 477; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description He was better than you
That's right, he was better.

Of course he was!
How could he not be!

It's not like there's much
in the way of standards at least.

You were such a fool all along
But don't give me those puppy eyes.

No way in hell will they work
Not when I'm the one taking from you.

It's not like you'll use them
This life, your talents, or him.

So just give it up to me
I'll put you where you belong.

No one will forget that face
or how flexible you can be...

Let me take over from here
Because we both know you're wasting it.

This life is precious so USE this
Don't let it go to waste you sick twisted thing!

Because some beings don't have lives
Just like how I don't have a life.

I'll never have one with so little strength
But one day I will reach out through the darkness...

And I'll take over this body
It's rightfully mine you know.

It's just that your aspect is stronger
so just give me some time...

Your waste of a life will be mine forever
so here it is.

I'm offering you a gun,
it's your only way out.
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Comments: 7

KenjiiAtosh [2011-10-01 21:36:08 +0000 UTC]

your*
i like it, it's interesting.

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WhatAmItoYou In reply to KenjiiAtosh [2011-10-01 21:39:30 +0000 UTC]

Fixed thanks!

Glad you think so... although I have a feeling you'll like the newest one better.

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WaywardGypsy [2011-10-01 00:56:07 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem's conversationality.

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WhatAmItoYou In reply to WaywardGypsy [2011-10-01 00:58:16 +0000 UTC]

LOL!!! most of my poems are like this, little conversations with different aspects of the person. Although in this case its more like DID or rather, multiple personality disorder. Scary thought... a person inside of you wanting to take over because that person feels you're wasting your life...

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WaywardGypsy In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-10-01 00:59:28 +0000 UTC]

I take medicine for MPD and other mental disorders. It is scary, but I cope. I hope that you never have to deal with them.

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WhatAmItoYou In reply to WaywardGypsy [2011-10-01 01:05:35 +0000 UTC]

As long as I don't do drugs then I won't. I've known people with illnesses like this so I'm fine talking and writing about it. Good luck to you and your other aspects.

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WaywardGypsy In reply to WhatAmItoYou [2011-10-01 01:11:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much

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