SeaStarFishFloat [2011-11-09 22:55:24 +0000 UTC]
I love the last stanza! I mean its all good but I think the last couple is my fav!
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whatisatowel In reply to SeaStarFishFloat [2011-11-10 03:30:48 +0000 UTC]
thanks bro. the last line is actually lifted from a jazz song and was the basis for the poem. can't remember what song it was, but it was real pretty, I assure you.
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