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heyitspeepsqueak [2017-11-22 12:54:48 +0000 UTC]

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Yey this is so good! I like how the lines go out (yea like the coloring) on the ears so it makes it look like it's furry and stuff. Also, I think you can try not to have the lines suddenly think, then thin, like on the tail. Overall, I think it's really great and I really like your shading. I also have to spam like DIEDCONFUSED so yea because of the word minimum thing thing. okey here we go: bibbity boppity boo, the mouse went up the poo, the poo said moo, bibbity boppity boo (yep that's the rhyme me and WhizpopDrawer made up hehe

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Doodlebear5904 [2017-11-19 19:11:19 +0000 UTC]

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I've never really done a critique so bear with me! ;o;

This is a very cute piece! The coloring and markings look very clean, though I would suggest zooming out a bit when lining (if that's what you're actually doing) to get cleaner line work. I say this because you can see each broken stroke in some places, mainly the ears, top of the head, and the legs. I love the expression and how their legs are placed, you can kind of imagine them prancing and hopping around giddily! It may just be personal preference but I would shorten the front leg's shoulder line and maybe thin the upper front leg. I really like the gradient on the base of their hindquarter and tail marking. To make the shading pop a bit more, I would make it a bit more blue and less monotone gray. The placement of the farther ear is a bit odd and it's sightly larger than the closer one, I would maybe distinguish the front of the head from where the ear starts by dragging out the line of the top of the head in front of the farther ear to really show that the further ear is on the other side of their head.

Terribly sorry if my wording was confusing ;n;"

And my apologies to Finch, I know that you're a girl but I wasn't sure about your character! :'0

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flowerpetallss [2017-11-19 18:25:35 +0000 UTC]

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I honestly think this piece is really good! But, some of the coloring in especially in the ears is outside of the lines. The shading could use some work, and the spot that the light is coming from could also use some work. Originality is good, but I definitely have seen some other artists use around the same pose. Either way, this is a real nice piece! (Well, now I have to spam random things to be able to get to the word limit, so.. um here.) doodly doo doodly doo doodly doo doodly doo doodly doo doodly doo doodly doo

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DeltaStarz91 [2017-02-16 11:44:26 +0000 UTC]

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so cute so awesome so beautiful so breathtaking so amazing so good so great so unbelievable so stunning so cute so awesome so beautiful so breathtaking so amazing so good so great so unbelievable so stunning so cute so awesome so beautiful so breathtaking so amazing so good so great so unbelievable so stunning so cute so awesome so beautiful so breathtaking so amazing so good so great so unbelievable so stunning so cute so awesome so beautiful so breathtaking so amazing so good so great so unbelievable so stunning so cute so awesome so beautiful so breathtaking so amazing so good so great so unbelievable so stunning meow

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Finchwing [2017-02-25 14:45:54 +0000 UTC]

AA this is so sweet !! Thank you!! ;uu;

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ivytea [2017-02-17 00:45:59 +0000 UTC]

so cute i love this

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