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whisperingshadowz17 — release me
Published: 2009-12-16 20:42:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description I vent in unnatural ways
placating the next step
my wandering feet take
trudging through weather
jesus would menace at
in the river i walk
no shoes
no socks
slipping on rocks
sliding on stones
mud and ice
in the water you see
its so cold and your feet
start to freeze
you feel nothing
as was before
although nothing
matters now
hate fills the psyche
rationality is long gone
lets vent to this paper
on the rocks of the water
hiking through snow
hail anything
nature can't bring down
a force such as this
I am of my own element and
I vent in anomalous ways
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Comments: 13

happymegs81 [2009-12-22 05:07:39 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, both the poem and your artist comment.
You did a great job on this one.

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whisperingshadowz17 In reply to happymegs81 [2009-12-22 23:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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happymegs81 In reply to whisperingshadowz17 [2009-12-23 08:06:35 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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happymegs81 [2009-12-22 05:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, both the poem and your artist comment.
You did a great job on this one.

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Wyddahwyr [2009-12-16 21:05:34 +0000 UTC]

You're more than welcome to come munch fries and hike with us, but you'd probably laugh hard enough to snort out loud.

Wonderful imagery you used. The tone you set is almost palpable. Life does, indeed, erupt at times leaving you to dodge the fall out or get smothered by it.

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whisperingshadowz17 In reply to Wyddahwyr [2009-12-16 21:23:07 +0000 UTC]

Iwould take up that offer but, I'm on a diet and I don't mind the snorting lolz it would be helpful to laugh more everyday. thanks

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Wyddahwyr In reply to whisperingshadowz17 [2009-12-16 21:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Now listen missy, come hiking with us and you can have all the fries you can munch. That's because the hike will work them off plus some! Of course, if you back into a cactus you'll move a little faster.

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whisperingshadowz17 In reply to Wyddahwyr [2009-12-16 21:45:28 +0000 UTC]

ahahaha wow thanks for the laughs youre great.

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Wyddahwyr In reply to whisperingshadowz17 [2009-12-16 21:50:14 +0000 UTC]

You're absolutely welcome. It's good to know you're laughing. My prescription is to do that at least four times a day or more!

You're pretty great too!

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whisperingshadowz17 In reply to Wyddahwyr [2009-12-16 22:00:47 +0000 UTC]

ahahahah sure i am

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Wyddahwyr In reply to whisperingshadowz17 [2009-12-17 02:06:15 +0000 UTC]

If it weren't true, I wouldn't say it. Just like the manatees in the pool earlier. If they weren't huge and so ugly they're cute, I wouldn't have said it.

You are a great person! If you don't believe it, just ask me. I'm not known for "being nice" just to be nice.

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whisperingshadowz17 In reply to Wyddahwyr [2009-12-17 02:20:10 +0000 UTC]

ahahahahahha you are ridiculous.

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Wyddahwyr In reply to whisperingshadowz17 [2009-12-17 02:25:22 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps....but truth is truth! So there!

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