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Published: 2015-05-17 23:43:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 4882; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 0
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I should have known better than to try archeology in Latveria. Athena was welcome to explore the old von Doom relics, and dig in legitimate areas. But White Owl was a different matter. As I was attempting to save the life of a rebel peasant leader, I was stunned by a special sonic and electric blast. Bound with liberal amounts of a specialized adhesive, I was brought to the judgement hall of the ruler, to await Doom's decision...Gift art for my friend
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Well, here I am on your DA page giving you a critique. Isn't life wonderful?
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I like the lighting you've used here when it comes to the stonework of the throne room. I'm not familiar with this prop/set piece but if it is an older prop it is aging well. I don't know if you are a DAZ or Poser user, I'm not experienced enough to tell the difference in rendering between the two, to be honest. I do think the shadows look good, not overly hard on the outlines so you either have a good light set out of the box or you tweeked the light settings. Either way, bravo there.
Now down to the technical stuff. You've got some poke-through issues starting with the boots. You could bend at the knees less and then twist the shin to put the ankles flat on the ground. That is one option especially on a close up like this. That way it doesn't look like White Owl is missing an Achilles tendon in her right foot. It would also help with poke-through around the knee area into the thighs of the boot.
I recognize that tape binding prop too, u-tube I think it's called. I also see you had some issues with it around the shoulder area like I always do. It sucks, but if you move the shoulders out of the stock pose a little bit and scale the tape tube on the x and z axis you might have better results.
It looks like you've got some poke-through with Doom as well as he sits on his throne. Not really much you could do about it given his costume unless you sat him back in the chair a little more or maybe scaled the chair to be larger. (If it is a separate prop.)
I really like White Owl's backside and the way you made the costume fit in her butt-crack. The pantyhose look good also. The belt fits really well too, so overall excellent job on WO's costume.
Dr. Doom looks good too but I especially like the glass and the transparency there and his pose overall. I think you definitely nailed that part to the wall.
Overall? I like it. I like the concept and I like the poses (for the most part) of both characters. A little extra time with the poke-through would save you some time on post work if you do that kind of thing. If not? That's great too!
Much <3 RP
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Still love this image. Thank you SO much, White Owl. Even I'm not sure exactly what 'I' used to bind your arms so completely behind your back, but it's obvious it's not breakable! And with the power of the green globe before you... Doom has dreamed of this day lovely White Owl!!!!
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Is it Doom, or was it a Doombot all along?
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Oh it was Doom!
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Well, you should know that, Doom does not like at all intruders on their land
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I like White Owl! Now that I've captured her!
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I wonder what's next for her
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Well, the power of the green globe can rip through costumes with a mere thought so... I've always wondered what she looks like... !!!
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Foolish little owl! You should have known better!
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Whoa...Viktor iz not be lookz happy....mwuah hahahahaha
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Well, he does rule the place with an iron(?) fist...
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Iron alloy. But for the most part you're right.
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You know, he once made a statue out of Storm.
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It's still around here somewhere...
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Yes, I have a scan of the scenes of storm statue.
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why am I not surprised 
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You know doom also made an andriod servant to look like Storm. Maybe he plans to make a While Owl android servant as well.
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Wow, why would Doom fall for old Suzy with White Owl before him?
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That was in my 'blue' period. I like Owls now!
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Where could you have heard that???
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Now I have you where I want you!!!
SO many options... so many deathtraps prepared just for you!!!
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Yes! The things I can do to White Owl with the power of the globe!!!
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An adhesive trap? What a sticky situation!
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Yes Very sticky--at least the tape isn't red...
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Oh my someone should have left their white owl suit at home... Now you'll face Doom's benevolent justice system.
wonderful work right down to doom on the throne with his glass of wine.
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I just can't seem to leave it behind...
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Well I hope for your sake that Deadpool makes an unannounced visit because unless Doom make you do him a favor you're in deep trouble.
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I'm hoping for Squirrel Girl myself
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Yeah she did give Doon and the Juggernaut Nightmares.
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Well, I'm not an official member of the F4, per se...
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Doom has turned good recently (in the comics) or so the rumor goes. It's safe to come over for tea time now Curia-DD! And no need to bring your weapons leave them home...
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yes--and a new nemesis of mine on line...
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Behold Doom in all his gloriousness!! Anyone who dares to defy him shall face... yeah... DOOM!!! I cannot help it, he's my favourite villain from all time!!! ^^
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