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Published: 2015-05-17 23:43:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 4882; Favourites: 66; Downloads: 0
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Description I should have known better than to try archeology in Latveria.  Athena was welcome to explore the old von Doom relics, and dig in legitimate areas.  But White Owl was a different matter.  As I was attempting to save the life of a rebel peasant leader, I was stunned by a special sonic and electric blast.  Bound with liberal amounts of a specialized adhesive, I was brought to the judgement hall of the ruler, to await Doom's decision...

Gift art for my friend
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RenderPretender [2015-05-18 03:33:40 +0000 UTC]

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Well, here I am on your DA page giving you a critique. Isn't life wonderful?

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I like the lighting you've used here when it comes to the stonework of the throne room. I'm not familiar with this prop/set piece but if it is an older prop it is aging well. I don't know if you are a DAZ or Poser user, I'm not experienced enough to tell the difference in rendering between the two, to be honest. I do think the shadows look good, not overly hard on the outlines so you either have a good light set out of the box or you tweeked the light settings. Either way, bravo there.

Now down to the technical stuff. You've got some poke-through issues starting with the boots. You could bend at the knees less and then twist the shin to put the ankles flat on the ground. That is one option especially on a close up like this. That way it doesn't look like White Owl is missing an Achilles tendon in her right foot. It would also help with poke-through around the knee area into the thighs of the boot.

I recognize that tape binding prop too, u-tube I think it's called. I also see you had some issues with it around the shoulder area like I always do. It sucks, but if you move the shoulders out of the stock pose a little bit and scale the tape tube on the x and z axis you might have better results.

It looks like you've got some poke-through with Doom as well as he sits on his throne. Not really much you could do about it given his costume unless you sat him back in the chair a little more or maybe scaled the chair to be larger. (If it is a separate prop.)

I really like White Owl's backside and the way you made the costume fit in her butt-crack. The pantyhose look good also. The belt fits really well too, so overall excellent job on WO's costume.

Dr. Doom looks good too but I especially like the glass and the transparency there and his pose overall. I think you definitely nailed that part to the wall.

Overall? I like it. I like the concept and I like the poses (for the most part) of both characters. A little extra time with the poke-through would save you some time on post work if you do that kind of thing. If not? That's great too!

Much <3 RP

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DoctorDoom00 [2018-05-22 00:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Still love this image.  Thank you SO much, White Owl.  Even I'm not sure exactly what 'I' used to bind your arms so completely behind your back, but it's obvious it's not breakable!  And with the power of the green globe before you... Doom has dreamed of this day lovely White Owl!!!!

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The-Mighty-Spectra [2016-01-16 17:56:19 +0000 UTC]

Is it Doom, or was it a Doombot all along?

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White0wlsuperheroine In reply to The-Mighty-Spectra [2016-01-16 19:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh it was Doom!

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Beltgag [2015-12-20 14:39:49 +0000 UTC]

don't worry, he's a true gentleman

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to Beltgag [2018-05-22 00:09:52 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha!

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jerrie46 [2015-07-27 18:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Love seeing Dr. Doom in 3D!

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colts316 [2015-06-05 18:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Well, you should know that, Doom does not like at all intruders on their land

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to colts316 [2018-05-22 00:10:27 +0000 UTC]

I like White Owl!  Now that I've captured her!

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colts316 In reply to DoctorDoom00 [2018-05-26 03:47:05 +0000 UTC]

I wonder what's next for her

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to colts316 [2018-05-27 02:48:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, the power of the green globe can rip through costumes with a mere thought so... I've always wondered what she looks like...  !!!

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colts316 In reply to DoctorDoom00 [2018-05-27 02:57:13 +0000 UTC]

Fair enought

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The-Mind-Controller [2015-06-02 18:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Foolish little owl!  You should have known better!

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Dimples-Bratt [2015-05-19 09:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Whoa...Viktor iz not be lookz happy....mwuah hahahahaha  

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Parasyte123 [2015-05-19 01:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Well, he does rule the place with an iron(?) fist...

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to Parasyte123 [2015-05-19 01:35:36 +0000 UTC]

Iron alloy.  But for the most part you're right.

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MechaSally [2015-05-18 19:31:31 +0000 UTC]

best angle

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White0wlsuperheroine In reply to MechaSally [2015-05-18 19:36:44 +0000 UTC]

You know, he once made a statue out of Storm.

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to White0wlsuperheroine [2015-05-19 01:36:22 +0000 UTC]

It's still around here somewhere...

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MechaSally In reply to White0wlsuperheroine [2015-05-18 20:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I have a scan of the scenes of storm statue.

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White0wlsuperheroine In reply to MechaSally [2015-05-18 22:59:08 +0000 UTC]

why am I not surprised   ?

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The-Mind-Controller In reply to White0wlsuperheroine [2015-06-02 18:26:39 +0000 UTC]

You know doom also made an andriod servant to look like Storm.  Maybe he plans to make a While Owl android servant as well.

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pizzanerd1 [2015-05-18 07:01:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow, why would Doom fall for old Suzy with White Owl before him?

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to pizzanerd1 [2015-05-18 23:08:44 +0000 UTC]

That was in my 'blue' period.  I like Owls now! 

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OakEgg [2015-05-18 03:54:25 +0000 UTC]

That's great. I love that throne

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ladytania [2015-05-18 03:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, I have heard that Mr. Doom is single..

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to ladytania [2015-05-18 05:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Where could you have heard that??? 

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DoctorDoom00 [2015-05-18 01:36:26 +0000 UTC]

Now I have you where I want you!!!

SO many options... so many deathtraps prepared just for you!!!

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Mr-Hypnotyk [2015-05-18 00:50:36 +0000 UTC]

What a revoltin' development!

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Beltgag In reply to Mr-Hypnotyk [2015-12-20 14:40:15 +0000 UTC]

ah ah

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HypnoHunter [2015-05-18 00:44:38 +0000 UTC]

DOOM!
Girl's in for it now!

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to HypnoHunter [2018-05-22 00:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes!  The things I can do to White Owl with the power of the globe!!!

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RopemasterSecretspy [2015-05-18 00:00:34 +0000 UTC]

An adhesive trap? What a sticky situation!

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White0wlsuperheroine In reply to RopemasterSecretspy [2015-05-18 00:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes  Very sticky--at least the tape isn't red...

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Kmon13 [2015-05-17 23:55:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh my someone should have left their white owl suit at home... Now you'll face Doom's benevolent justice system.

wonderful work right down to doom on the throne with his glass of wine.  
 

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White0wlsuperheroine In reply to Kmon13 [2015-05-18 00:30:22 +0000 UTC]

I just can't seem to leave it behind...

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Kmon13 In reply to White0wlsuperheroine [2015-05-18 00:33:15 +0000 UTC]

Well I hope for your sake that Deadpool makes an unannounced visit because unless Doom make you do him a favor you're  in deep trouble.   

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White0wlsuperheroine In reply to Kmon13 [2015-05-18 01:20:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm hoping for Squirrel Girl myself

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Kmon13 In reply to White0wlsuperheroine [2015-05-18 04:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah she did give Doon and the Juggernaut Nightmares.     

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Curia-DD [2015-05-17 23:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Is this Doom like from Fantastic 4?

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to Curia-DD [2015-05-18 23:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Kinda....

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Curia-DD In reply to DoctorDoom00 [2015-05-20 02:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to Curia-DD [2015-05-20 03:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm not an official member of the F4, per se...

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Curia-DD In reply to DoctorDoom00 [2015-05-20 03:33:15 +0000 UTC]

I see

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to Curia-DD [2018-05-22 00:19:37 +0000 UTC]

Doom has turned good recently (in the comics) or so the rumor goes.  It's safe to come over for tea time now Curia-DD!  And no need to bring your weapons leave them home... 

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Curia-DD In reply to DoctorDoom00 [2018-05-22 03:27:34 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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White0wlsuperheroine In reply to Curia-DD [2015-05-18 00:30:06 +0000 UTC]

yes--and a new nemesis of mine on line...

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Curia-DD In reply to White0wlsuperheroine [2015-05-20 02:16:06 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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zorro-zero [2015-05-17 23:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Behold Doom in all his gloriousness!! Anyone who dares to defy him shall face... yeah... DOOM!!! I cannot help it, he's my favourite villain from all time!!! ^^

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DoctorDoom00 In reply to zorro-zero [2015-05-18 23:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Venom's not bad.

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