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WhiteFangKakashi300 β€” Dark Equestria: Exile

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Description I had been reading the dark mlp fanfictions, like cupcakes and rainbow factory and thought of an idea to combine them with other stories I came up for the other characters.

I thought about WHY they got this way, so what if there was a dragon that Celestia defeated long ago and wanted revenge for what she and the rest of equestria had done to it. So it came back as a dark spirit and began corrupting them.
Dark Celestia would turn against Luna and exile her from equestria. Celestia would turn to Twilight Sparkle as her new right-hand-mare and let the dragon corrupt her as well. Twilight would be turned into "Midnight Shadow" and would be on the look out for any trouble, mishaps, or failures within the land... "Everything and Everyone MUST be perfect"
She would punish those who didn't follow the rules; stab trouble makers with her horn, put a spell on Spike or an animal and have it attack a pony, or put a ponies name on Pinkie's "cupcake" list if they broke the rules more than once.

Midnight Shadow gave teeth to Gummy so her could help Pinkie trap ponies who were next on the menu. "Meaty Pie" (AKA Pinkamena) she was now called kidnapped ponies and cut them up to put them into her pastries, sometimes she'd put someone's cutie mark on the cupcakes. Those who found what was REALLY inside Meaty's special pastries.... were next on the menu.

Rarity became one of the wealthiest ponies when the dragon spirit got a hold of her, she was addressed as "Lady Rarity" (AKA Little miss rarity) as seduced any male pony he wanted and gained more wealth and power. Those who knew what she was doing or got mad because she stole their husbands would be humiliated so that no one was on their side and would force them to become their slaves. Like Sweetie Belle who tried to stand up to her but failed and had her mouth sown.

Rainbow dash, now Rainbow Slash, runs the weather factories including the rainbow sector. Where all Pegasus's who were unworthy to have their full freedom to fly were sent to work in the rainbow sector, and one by one a pony would be crushed and used for the spectra *colors* of the rainbows. Here we're witnessing Scootaloo losing her wings as a punishment. *they're now on Meaty Pie's dress*.

Fluttershy began to lose hope and feared for her animals and fled with them to the Everfree forest where she and her critters were driven mad. She had mos grow on her skin when she fell into poison joke. No one dared enter the forest again, for those who did were killed by Fluttershy or her animals.
The children of equestria nicknamed her Dwellershy the phantom of the woods.

Applejack and her family were assigned to grow poisoned apples in their orchard, but they refused. So as a punishment their farm was burned down, Big Mac was caught and forced to work in the diamond mines. But Applejack escaped with Applebloom, suffering major burns, and joined other ponies like Zecora, Shining armor, and Pipsqueak to escape and plan a result with Princess Luna and other outcasts like Trixie and Gilda... Even Spike joined them, he had had enough of Midnight's torture spells and was heartbroken to see what she and many other ponies had become.

May the Quest of the Golden Apple begin!

MLP (C) Hasbro &
Queen Rarity design (C) quanno3
Based off of the factions Cupcakes and Rainbow Factory
Lady Rarity song (C) psychgoth
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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to ??? [2017-12-04 23:50:14 +0000 UTC]

Aye. Dark stuff.Β 
She spoke up against Lady Rarity and she didn't like it.

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ChazMLPFIMX In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2017-12-05 02:52:52 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but what I want to know is the full story of Rarity sown Sweetie Belle's mouth.

Rarity can't treat her sister like that, it not right.

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to ChazMLPFIMX [2017-12-05 20:32:30 +0000 UTC]

In this dark AU anything the main six once might have stood for has been thrown out the window. Only Apple Jack escaped with a select few. Rarity became power driven in the social elite, she doesn't take kindly to those who dare point out her flaws.Β 

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ChazMLPFIMX In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2018-07-26 17:50:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I know that, but I want to know about how is Rarity sown Sweetie Belle's mouth, and why was Sweetie Belle did not get away from Rarity?.

You should make a fanfiction of Rarity sown Sweetie Belle's mouth.

I can see that Spike is heartbroken Twilight Sparkle and the other become, that explain why he joined the outcast.

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to ChazMLPFIMX [2018-07-26 20:59:33 +0000 UTC]

I honestly did that for shock.
If you’re so eager to find out, feel free to write your own.

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ChazMLPFIMX In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2018-07-26 21:07:07 +0000 UTC]

Actually, I don't do stories.

And in case that you did not noticed,Β  I had a request ofΒ Β Dark Equestria: Rarity Sown Sweetie Belle's mouth - comic in a note.

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to ChazMLPFIMX [2018-08-03 20:36:41 +0000 UTC]

Well I don’t do requests or comics. I guess that puts us at a stalemate.

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ChazMLPFIMX In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2023-12-30 20:51:38 +0000 UTC]

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to ChazMLPFIMX [2023-12-30 22:39:22 +0000 UTC]

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ChazMLPFIMX In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2023-12-30 22:41:31 +0000 UTC]

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to ChazMLPFIMX [2023-12-30 22:43:21 +0000 UTC]

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ChazMLPFIMX In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2024-01-02 04:43:30 +0000 UTC]

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to ChazMLPFIMX [2024-01-02 05:16:52 +0000 UTC]

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KillerCatHat [2016-01-02 16:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Ok so I know Cupcakes and RainbowFactory... But what are the others?

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to KillerCatHat [2016-01-02 18:17:12 +0000 UTC]

The others are creepy blogs on tumblr. A few others like Twiligjt and Applejack I had to make up on the spot.Β 

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KillerCatHat In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2016-01-04 06:53:37 +0000 UTC]

Cool! Well they are amazing!

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to KillerCatHat [2016-01-04 20:30:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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trapezoidgummy [2015-03-16 00:46:57 +0000 UTC]

My first reaction: ...hooolly Shhhhhiiit

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to trapezoidgummy [2015-03-16 01:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

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trapezoidgummy In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2015-03-16 02:34:29 +0000 UTC]

So AJ is pretty much the only normal one?

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to trapezoidgummy [2015-03-16 04:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I couldn't find a creepypasta version of her at the time, so maybe she escaped with what was left of Equestria.

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trapezoidgummy In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2015-03-16 05:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Woah. Deep. XD

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SuperRainbowDashie11 [2014-10-24 15:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh god Β  Mutant ponies Β Where is APPLE BLOOM???

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to SuperRainbowDashie11 [2014-10-24 16:00:20 +0000 UTC]

She escaped with AJ.
She's not in the picture though.

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Centaur71 [2014-06-27 02:44:26 +0000 UTC]

now THIS is total WTF!!!

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to Centaur71 [2014-06-27 02:47:24 +0000 UTC]

I know, it's a lot to take in.

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bumbarash17 [2014-05-12 22:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Curse you Walrider!!!Β 

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to bumbarash17 [2014-05-12 22:15:56 +0000 UTC]

indeed

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sebastieng [2013-10-30 05:22:27 +0000 UTC]

OMG Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo!

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to sebastieng [2013-10-30 13:05:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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MightyMorphinPower4 [2013-09-18 14:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Cool work

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to MightyMorphinPower4 [2013-09-19 16:02:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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ElementOf-Loyalty [2013-08-13 00:17:59 +0000 UTC]

My head is gonna burst from the massive overloadΒ epic win from this image,I have to go to save myself.

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to ElementOf-Loyalty [2013-08-13 04:47:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks

make haste!

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Diebro210 [2013-08-05 18:10:31 +0000 UTC]

epic so awesome great job

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to Diebro210 [2013-08-05 18:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Scararb [2013-07-18 16:04:54 +0000 UTC]

ummmmm creepy

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to Scararb [2013-07-18 23:10:10 +0000 UTC]

indeed

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Scararb In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2013-09-07 18:11:09 +0000 UTC]

ya

Β 

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BadgerQWERT [2013-06-25 13:13:59 +0000 UTC]

I freaking love this.
I hope to see more.

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to BadgerQWERT [2013-06-25 14:20:40 +0000 UTC]

glad you like it ^^

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Auroraskytheartist [2013-06-20 02:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Thats weird i'm working on a fanfic that envolves the dragon of destruction who wants revenge on celestia for banishing him in to the earth... But he doesn't corrupt the others. Still its strange how you came up with a dragon who wants revenge and how i created a dragon who wants revenge...

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to Auroraskytheartist [2013-06-20 08:00:54 +0000 UTC]

That is weird.
Oh well, I haven't even started writing this, I may change some bit later. So you go ahead with your story

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Auroraskytheartist In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2013-06-20 13:41:01 +0000 UTC]

Ok sometimes it happens ith other people but it does turn out different too.

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to Auroraskytheartist [2013-06-20 15:13:37 +0000 UTC]

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WolfySterling [2013-05-21 21:54:17 +0000 UTC]

What are the Other ones Other than rainbow factory, cupcakes, apple acres massacre, and raritys new Dress

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to WolfySterling [2013-05-22 07:18:06 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, the rest I made up, except for molestia.

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WolfySterling In reply to WhiteFangKakashi300 [2013-05-22 21:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Ah ok

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Magicalmaster [2013-05-05 16:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Hello! ;:>
I acctually like these stories very much and I think this is great!

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WhiteFangKakashi300 In reply to Magicalmaster [2013-05-05 21:09:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^
Glad you like them

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