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WhiteNoiseGhost β€” 'Worst OC Contest' entry: Princess Mary Sue

Published: 2014-06-23 13:57:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 6106; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 27
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Description This is my entry for the "Worst OC" contest from
drawing this hurt my eyes x'D

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Princess Mary Shapeshifter Specialia Sue the Incredible was born as a succubus in the dark lands of The Underworld. However, she was very special and different from all the other demons, so they were cruel to her and sent her to Earth to rot, for fhey could not bear her rainbow magic and were afraid of the star markings on her body.

Princess Mary, not knowing she was a princess at all at that point, was then adopted by wolves who taught her the languages of the forest so that she could speak every language in it, and could talk to plants, animals, and even rocks and water! She learned how to bend the elements and somehow she barely had to practice before she could do it perfectly. this caused her to become the next Avatar.
when she turned 18, she became immortal and found out that she was the princess of the Underworld.

but when she was reunited with her father, the Devil Himself, he exploded because her rainbow powers were far too great and she was too powerful and too good for him.
so she decided to become an angel. she learned all the things angels had to learn in less than 1 day! the high Seraph wanted to reward her for being so talented as an angel, but then found out that she was also a demon and wanted to banish her.
Princess Mary then became enraged and as she did, the star markings on her body turned into dragons with the power of a thousand gods and they ravaged everything! when she went back to her normal state, all the angels wanted her to be their new Seraph because it turned out that the old one was evil all along!

Countless years passed as Mary took care of both Heaven and Hell but then a portal appeared in front of her along with a voice saying she was The Chosen One. she went through it and suddenly saw she was an Alicorn Prince and had ended up in Equestria, where she, in her male form, was so attractive rhat she married with all the alicorn princesses.
before she returned home, she summoned the sun and the moon to banish all evil from the land of equines in a few minutes and flew off mysteriously. however, her wings were so strong that she then flew against the raindow factory and something happened there that was so tragic, that even her shadow turned into rainbow colour, enchancing her endless powers even more. she also became the head of the rainbow factory before going through the portal again, surprisingly enough finding herself on Earth again.

back on earth, she discovered that she was actually not only the queen of heaven and hell and king of Equestria, but also that she had created the universe before she was born. it was written in an ancient prophecy in a temple made for her when she was born.

while on Earth, she spent her time becoming a celebrity and saving the world all the time. because she wanted to be even cooler, she turned herself into a werewolf vampire (the only one in existence!) and used her magic to create two edgy rainbow boots that she can turn into motorbikes with her mind.
when shr arrived in Japan, she saw that there was only one thing greater than her and those were Vocaloids. so she became one too and in a single day became even more popular than Hatsune Miku. she hosts countless tv shows all over the world and even has her own cooking program, because she discovered she was the most talented cook in the world!

that was when another portal appeared in front of her and she used it to go to all kinds of different universes and become the greatest of all times. She became Pokemon Champion of all regions and can summon legendaries at her side at any random moment, she became the Dovahkiin and united the dragons with the people of Skyrim to live in peace and harmony, she became the next Doctor and learned how to shoot lazer beams from her custom made rainbow power TARDIS, and she also defeated Voldemort in a different dimension with her unbeatable powers.

Her eyes, horn and wings change colour when she is in a different mood. for example, when she's happy, they are rainbow with a little extra pink. and when she is sad, they are rainbow with a little extra blue. but when she's angry, she turns into a frightening demon but is so powerful that she can easily control herself while in that state. the dragons she summons wirh her special star markings are faster than light and can kill anything they touch in one hit. they can also be used as a shield Mary can use to protect all her friends. she wouldnt need to protect herself, because her skin and clothing are both inpenetrable because she is invincible and immortal.
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that. was a very long write xD i hope its bad enough!

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Comments: 85

bananaisawesome [2017-06-22 22:05:35 +0000 UTC]

please, add some glitter. it makes everything better.

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IdkWhatThisIsFor [2017-01-21 06:14:23 +0000 UTC]

Omfg DA RAINBOWS, xD

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IdkWhatThisIsFor In reply to IdkWhatThisIsFor [2017-01-21 06:14:43 +0000 UTC]

(They freakin hurt my eyes ;-; )

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the-anything-network [2017-01-12 23:20:55 +0000 UTC]

the thing that's sad is i saw a person at a comic con dressed exactly like that XD

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to the-anything-network [2017-01-13 09:13:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god... xD

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the-anything-network In reply to WhiteNoiseGhost [2017-01-13 14:26:04 +0000 UTC]

i know right?

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AShinyUmbreon6 [2015-10-05 10:27:38 +0000 UTC]

oh fuck

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to AShinyUmbreon6 [2015-10-06 06:23:08 +0000 UTC]

I wonder why this joke drawing keeps getting comments xD

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AShinyFlareon6 In reply to WhiteNoiseGhost [2015-10-09 22:32:54 +0000 UTC]

oh no i know its a joke, so i hope you won the contest.

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RaverMan101 [2015-08-14 17:06:28 +0000 UTC]

wait
so this was actually a thing?

is this just a combination of all the "cliche" things you usually see in Deviant art characters?

i'm just asking...cuz' thats what it seems like...

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to RaverMan101 [2015-08-17 11:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Its neither. It's a contest entry I made for some contest a while ago, where one had to design the worst OC possible, no big deal.

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RaverMan101 In reply to WhiteNoiseGhost [2015-08-19 17:59:32 +0000 UTC]

oh ok.
its just i noticed a few things andΒ mis-informedΒ myself

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PantylicoArt [2015-07-16 10:46:52 +0000 UTC]

This is such a great Terrible Oc!

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Auroranstar [2015-07-13 22:06:37 +0000 UTC]

IM SERIOUS ITS DA BEST

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to Auroranstar [2015-07-14 18:10:04 +0000 UTC]

....how? xD

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Auroranstar [2015-07-11 23:07:55 +0000 UTC]

I love the idea and the story. its not the worst! ITS THE BEST THING IVE EVER SEEN!!!!!

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to Auroranstar [2015-07-12 15:53:13 +0000 UTC]

Wait... what? xD are you serious or just kidding around?

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splatter789 [2015-06-26 11:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Imagine her pony form getting Rainbow Powered...

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to splatter789 [2015-07-12 15:51:36 +0000 UTC]

Ouch, that hurt x'D

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splatter789 In reply to WhiteNoiseGhost [2015-07-12 19:03:08 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that means I've succeeded!

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to splatter789 [2015-07-12 20:08:06 +0000 UTC]

You wanted to hurt me that badly? ;^; wueeeeeehhhh *eats a shit load of ice cream*

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Justin-Murphy [2015-04-29 05:48:20 +0000 UTC]

>RAINBOW POWER
MY OCD HURTS XD

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safyia110 [2015-03-14 03:10:05 +0000 UTC]

I love this so very much!Β  You most certainly deserve your win with this!

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to safyia110 [2015-03-16 12:28:00 +0000 UTC]

Awww thank you so much! ^^

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Dylan-the-dude [2014-12-27 03:20:59 +0000 UTC]

she makes fallen angels look like shit, makes us feel bad for those who try…
Thank Beloth she's a joke OC

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FelixFox1991 [2014-12-17 09:08:20 +0000 UTC]

I CANT WAIT TO SEE HER MLP RAINBOW POWER FORM HHHHHH

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TagMason [2014-12-09 18:12:00 +0000 UTC]

This

Is glorious.Β 

I'm just vomiting mary sue rainbow power from the gloriousness of this.Β 


(Oddly enough even with the immense effort you put into making this as sue as possible, she is STILL aesthetically pleasing. RAINBOWS WEE)

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to TagMason [2014-12-10 08:41:46 +0000 UTC]

Aesthetically pleasing you say? xD I wouldnt dare touch it lest I...explode....into...dem....rainbows......withbabylotion. I did win this contest so at least the hours of cringing over this creation was worth it xD

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ilovewheatley [2014-07-31 21:05:03 +0000 UTC]

There's one thing that could have made this better, and thats if she was still super humble about all of it and actually think she's ugly/fat to make everyone love her even more.

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to ilovewheatley [2014-08-01 07:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Youre right xD thatd be hilarious ahah

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ilovewheatley In reply to WhiteNoiseGhost [2014-08-01 08:33:28 +0000 UTC]

Well there's always next time c;

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to ilovewheatley [2014-08-01 09:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Yup. Plus i won 1st place with this one :3

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ilovewheatley In reply to WhiteNoiseGhost [2014-08-01 10:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, well done! ^^ It was definitely deserving

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to ilovewheatley [2014-08-01 10:52:51 +0000 UTC]

Awwww thanks! ^^

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May-I-Tutchem [2014-07-31 20:52:14 +0000 UTC]

OMFG

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to May-I-Tutchem [2014-08-01 07:27:43 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW RIGHT

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May-I-Tutchem In reply to WhiteNoiseGhost [2014-08-01 12:41:01 +0000 UTC]

BEST OC EVER

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to May-I-Tutchem [2014-08-04 08:43:25 +0000 UTC]

YEH I MEAN HOW CAN ONE NOT LOOOVE THAT SAD AND TRAGIC BACKSTORY RIGHT

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May-I-Tutchem In reply to WhiteNoiseGhost [2014-08-04 14:16:51 +0000 UTC]

ITS INCREDIBLE!

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Miss-Mutated-Mango [2014-07-30 19:18:47 +0000 UTC]

You have just made my day. Thank you for that~

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to Miss-Mutated-Mango [2014-07-31 20:42:26 +0000 UTC]

No problem~

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parva-castanei [2014-07-09 23:32:43 +0000 UTC]

looks like I little filli's toy gone wrong!
I like her!

Β seriously I had no idea there were so many entrys! till now XD

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Korwynze [2014-07-01 18:45:11 +0000 UTC]

holy shit is that xD

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to Korwynze [2014-07-03 07:39:08 +0000 UTC]

A princess~

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Korwynze In reply to WhiteNoiseGhost [2014-07-03 13:00:30 +0000 UTC]

wow

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i8ora [2014-06-27 19:24:10 +0000 UTC]

THIS thing would win the pony OC voting!
Without a doubt. XD

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The-Mad-Cat [2014-06-26 10:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful....or terrific...is a stunning Mary sue

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WhiteNoiseGhost In reply to The-Mad-Cat [2014-06-26 10:39:33 +0000 UTC]

The rainbows kill everyone :3

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HakumeiKira [2014-06-24 12:31:28 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing, I love her! XXXXD Yeah for rainbowish-rainbowcoloured-rainbowsparkling-rainbows!

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LiiflessWolf [2014-06-23 20:44:20 +0000 UTC]

ZAZZZZZZZZZAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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