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WhiteWolfSentry — Emily the Umbreon

Published: 2011-01-29 06:42:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 184; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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Description This is a sketch of the requested Umbreon character that Mak asked me to design! Her name is Emily, and she's a long furred, green eyed/ green marking'd umbreon.

Have fun Mak! I hope you like her! I sure enjoyed doodling her~
I was afraid to ink her... I usually spoil details when I ink.... alas...

Emily (c) Mak
Umbreon (c) pokemon
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Comments: 10

Tinuvion [2011-01-29 19:45:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh~, nice design! Awwww, green and black... I'm sure it would look awesome.
Love the googles. <3 She looks like she's going on an adventure.
I like the fur, but the anatomy looks off here. I'm too lazy to describe it right now, so... I could do some red-lines if you want, just to see, but I know you can do better anyway.

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WhiteWolfSentry In reply to Tinuvion [2011-01-30 03:16:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! and perhaps she is... =3 it'd be fun to see where her requester takes her

hmm that'd be great if you could redline it! I'd reall appreciate it! I sometimes dont see what I'm doing wrong with anatomy, though I try

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Tinuvion In reply to WhiteWolfSentry [2011-01-30 13:50:42 +0000 UTC]

There you go: [link]
The redlines are far from perfect, but I guess they'll do it. I thought the neck is a little too short, but you don't have to correct that. I know how annoying this can get on paper. D: So what I could not describe, is the back. As for the backlegs... hehe, you did the same mistake I used to do for years. There is no ankle at the backleg at the height where it is at the frontleg short before the paw starts. Oh, and I thought the backleg on the other side looked a little weird. But if you want it there, you could draw it more streched... I totally suck at explaining. >.<'
And I think it's natural that you didn't see that. That's what everybody tends to. :3 But you got the basics right, so it's not bad.^^

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WhiteWolfSentry In reply to Tinuvion [2011-02-12 22:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! and no, you don't stink at explaining! this was really very helpful! I learned alot from your red lines, and it helped me with other parts of the anatomy as well~ Thanks Kiu!

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MisttheWarrior [2011-01-29 19:00:03 +0000 UTC]

I really like how you are developing your eye style~
Go ahead and ink it! You can never improve if you're too afraid to try!

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WhiteWolfSentry In reply to MisttheWarrior [2011-01-30 03:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! 8D eyes are the window to the soul, right? gotta get those eyes down... =3 And Will do! just gotta get some more ink pens...mine are running out of ink DX

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MisttheWarrior In reply to WhiteWolfSentry [2011-01-30 04:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Yes, get the good kind, too- MICRONS.

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WhiteWolfSentry In reply to MisttheWarrior [2011-02-12 22:34:37 +0000 UTC]

ooooh microns? Never used those... I used a german brand of outliners, and they worked well~

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MisttheWarrior In reply to WhiteWolfSentry [2011-02-19 04:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Hm...well I dunno. I just really luv Microns.

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WhiteWolfSentry In reply to MisttheWarrior [2011-02-25 03:22:51 +0000 UTC]

^_^ I'll definitely try them!

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