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Published: 2007-09-20 11:46:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 99; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description People wake up taking deep breaths...
As if it was the last draw before their deaths...
The worlds at war with there own fucking race...
People taking their place to die cause of the colour of their face...
We gotta stop this before it’s too late...
Seeing the future of our kind leaving it to fate...
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Comments: 7

freakyrosechild [2007-09-22 06:37:41 +0000 UTC]

truely deep and the point is greatly true x3 well done

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Flane-Erenaeoth [2007-09-21 21:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice. It's expressive- I like it, powerful in it's short and abrupt points XDD
you should write more often- we don't get to see much of your writing XP

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garseeya [2007-09-21 01:33:13 +0000 UTC]

wow thats very well writte. very deep and true too

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Praecedes [2007-09-20 22:25:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm not too sure what you're saying it for, but it's a really good paragraph/poem/thingie.

Of course I have an idea, but I'm wondering what you wrote this for?

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NeoJaxie [2007-09-20 21:20:01 +0000 UTC]

Very true..... Very true...

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Pagu-chan [2007-09-20 21:00:13 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Thats really good!

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dark-geijutsuka [2007-09-20 20:18:37 +0000 UTC]

that's really good you've got some cool literature talent

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