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whydoidothiseveryday — Time Goes Back
Published: 2008-06-19 13:19:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 467; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 2
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Description
You are undug,Carried backwards,
People in black,
Who you will
Know soon.
You take your
First breath,
In a warm chair.
Feeling your
Wrinkles, and
Your grey hair.
A picture on the side,
Your grandchildren.
You have a husband,
Happily married.
The presence of your
First child,
A happy memory.
You are shouting
At your mother.
She will not
Let you out
Past 9.30.
Too many rules and
Boundaries.
You have found
Your favourite toy.
You struggle
To crawl towards it.
You cry for attention,
Until you find yourself
In the warm arms
Of your new mother.
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Comments: 49
This is pretty nice.
It reminds me of a song called Rewind by Nas. - he one of my fave rappers. Anyways he tells a whole story backward its so cool. Must be pretty differcult.
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lol thankyou
x
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i love how it just flies under your eyes, almost reading faster and faster as you read further and further 
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yeah i like this one, thanks
x
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wow i like this. its really good... i like the idea
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I was so confused, at first; I didn't read the title
so I reread it twice, a little more clear each time
and then I got it, after a little reflection
and I looked at the title, realizing I didn't look
and I felt stupid
*note to self - always read the title*
That's amazing. Love it, the idea of it is pretty much inspiring
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Every single thing on my watch list yesterday made my fave list
it was all amazing. All of it. you're welcome, though.
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poor old people=[=[
time isn't meant to go back through...
best to focus on the future..i was amazed that i understood this=]=]...but yea...go forward with life...its all certainty
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wow i like you concept here. a little fast but it seems to fit because sometimes our life seems to go by just as fast if not faster.
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Cool concept.
This part amused me:
You are shouting
At your mother.
She will not
Let you out
Past 9.30.
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nicely done 
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Ha, I didn't read the title first...that got confusing. But that's a really cool poem...I liked it. It flowed really well.
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lol, thanks
x
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Whoa. It's quick, but it really works. Had to reread it, heh.. but I love the lifetime concept. Well executed.
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This is a really cool concept. A life played in reverse...
It's very well written but a tad fast paced. But I really like it. Well done 
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lol need a lil time to catch up and read for some time. After then, I found out it's good. Nicely done.
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grrr! my sister was talking about ghosts as i read this so it came across like you were talking about a ghost and it messed all up! 'twas interesting with that twist though.
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This is really awesome. I like the speed of it.
God Bless<3
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lol is that a good thing?
x
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I don't know... I guess it's neither good or bad.
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