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WhytManga — Calios Page 1 Storyboard
Published: 2011-10-10 21:50:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 5388; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 132
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Here is page one, just for those who really follow meother pages:
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nice, i was caught off guard by the right to left reading at first XD but your storyboards are so much more detailed then mine XD (mine look o rough and crappy XD)
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Wait... this is read right to left right??? Ummm.... Well anyways, its good!
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i like the fact you've put posters in the bg of black and candle jack lolololol. xD
it looks good, really good. i really like the hand holding the ketchup bottle.
though i don't think the 4th panel (if it's right to left) is as good as the others. you could probably come up with a more inventive way of seeing these 2 characters in a room if you know what i mean. or maybe not even looking at the characters. looking at something in the room that tells us more about them. like a photo or a collage or some recent reading, a job application or a brochure, that kinda thing. you know. that way whilst they are having some small talk you could also get the reader to understand if he is an actor or if he is applying for a role in which case maybe a leaflet for a show would help imply that.
or just stick to finding a nicer way to view the two characters in the room.
looks great for a 'sketch' though. lol you should see my storyboards. i literally take almost no time. mostly fat stick men with letters on their heads to signify who they are lol
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really good ideas with the 4th panel...ur kinda right
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i can't wait for samurai top hat btw xD your sneak peak truly was tantilising lol. it looks really good
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plus i did the whole thing in a day
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Well there we go xD but still lololol.
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Hey, I really like this. Stick with this storyboard.
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wow, that's a fantastic story! i'm already interested! ^_^ and i like the Black and Candle Jack posters in her room, haha. i wish i had some lol. umm, the only "critique" on this would be the proportions of the mom's face in the 3rd-to-last panel, although i'm sure that'll be no concern for the finalized version. overall, you did a really nice job on this
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