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Published: 2010-04-23 21:29:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 726; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 30
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I got bored, so was looking through my old drawings and I found this one [link]so I decided to re-draw her
This lineart is free to use,
if you colour this I would love to see it
please give me credit if you use
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crit: irst of all, your lines are GREAT/ C;eam. neat. You could have pushed the line variation a bit more, expanding rather than deleting.... but I'm very jealous of how awesome your lines are.
Also the folds on her ribbons are great, and the hands are pretty impressive too, though that one pinky on the hand on our left is in a weird position. Lastly, it's good that you showed how the clothes are sittin ontop pf the skin, and didn't draw her necklace and such blending in with the skin.
:3 I'm sure you know all this but I like to praise before crit.
Now, the bad stuff, the bow on the back of her head doesn't look stiff enough, so it looks like nothing is holding it up. I'd tighten the corners more, add some strength to it's back, so to speak. Her head is waaaay too big, even for this style, and gives the character a midget look. Because of the style you want the head to be bigger, but you don't want too big. Now... the shoulders are what connect the arms to the torso... they are too far over... ON the arms, so it looks like only ligements are keeping her body attatched. I'd move them over.
You see the shoulder that is way high? First of all, I think it might be too high. Second of all, remember with the body when the shoulder moves up the hip moves down. Also, the breast muscles pull UP with the shoulders too. This is missing.
^-^ good job. Crit me?
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thanks for the crit
I don't get them much
although this is pretty old work now,
I'm sure I can use you tips for my new works
thank you very much once again
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sure you can colour
show me your result when you finished
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thank you
i don't know, you can name her
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lol the name i give look so weired
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I would love to know what name you were going to give her
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Kazue chan ( meaning "one branch" ) or Saki chan (means blossom ) ^^ is this good
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I will name her Kazue chan
she will be coloured soon
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whoo! I would like to see when your done
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Meh. The lines aren't fully clean.
So. I'll have to do it tomorrow when I have more than 10 minutes on the computer.
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what are you trying to colour it with?
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well it's not going to fill if you use the paint bucket,
because it's saved as a JPEG
If I saved it as a bitmap then you would be able to colour it fast in paint,
you should try photoshop, it's so much better then paint
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Or as a .png, because that's what I always save them as. Unless I forget, and then I either have to redo it, or it doesn't bother me enough to fix.
I don't want to have to buy it though.
And I don't do digital art enough to use it.
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you could get GIMP thats free on it's website
and is just as good as photoshop ^^
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I can't download things to my computer though.
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thank you
she can be whatever you want her to be
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Woah she looks real nice, how time is there between those 2 images? You have progressed a lot
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I think I was 12 when i did those old ones
thanks
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No problem, you started drawing at a young age ^^ , Im sure you become an awesome artist soon
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