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Wickerish — I'll light up your galaxy

Published: 2014-08-07 15:34:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 461; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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Description I made the flatcolor for this FOREVER ago, and I still really liked it, but I didn't like the shading I had started. So I decided to ditch the shading and start over with just the flatcolor. I've owned this character for a few months now, and I really need to make her a proper ref because I'm honestly in LOVE with her!
She's a Fayleit, a species created by Kiocah , and I adopted her from an egg a while back
Fayleits help bring about the changes of seasons, and her season is Fall! Her feather represents birds flying south for the winter

I'm still debating a name (I really want something space related)
I've been thinking I like Kuiper or Tauri
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Comments: 11

EssoRex [2014-08-08 05:02:16 +0000 UTC]

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This is amazing!! The shading is just outstanding and the fur and lines....wow. Your art has definitely come quite a way, and this is just magnificent. The paws are great, the lighting, the technique, it is all done so wonderfully!! Your style is doing a thing, and it is a good thing aaaa

There are a few things I would say could be changes though, of course that is the point of the critique. I think maybe next time focus on the proportions of the head/body, I have a real struggle with this as well. The actually body aside from the legs seems to be a tad bit too big for the characters head. Also, the eye seems a little too....open? It seems like it is looking at something REALLY shocking x33 the eyes doesn't look bad at all!! The detail and highlights are great, it just look a little odd how open it is.

This drawing isn't at all bad though, it is super fantastic actually. The visual impact is just like...woah. The pose is a little unoriginal but like, there are only so many poses yanno? x3 It looks cute here. The technique is definitely 5 stars, the shading and highlights and how you colored the lines and just everything, again, woah. The over all impact is huge, it is such an eye catcher, just the proportions seem a little off.

Great piece!! Looking forward to more from you ;w; I miss you dude we don't talk often enough <3

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Wickerish In reply to EssoRex [2014-08-08 14:41:15 +0000 UTC]

I havent gotten any critiques on my stuff in so long, then suddenely I get three on my three most recent picture in two days ;o; 
thanks for the critique! The lines are definitely a bit older than the shading, I didn't bother to change them up at all when I went back and finished this the other day. I'll definitely keep the proportions in mind for the future though!
thanks again!

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EssoRex In reply to Wickerish [2014-08-08 15:51:03 +0000 UTC]

Woahh :00 Heheh, you are welcome! I hope it helped a little <3 <3 it looks fantastic c:

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anatiidae [2014-08-07 18:46:16 +0000 UTC]

Your fur shading is always so beautiful ^_^

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Wickerish In reply to anatiidae [2014-08-08 21:22:24 +0000 UTC]

;;u;; thanks man!

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K0suke [2014-08-07 16:39:56 +0000 UTC]

THAT SHADING OMG HOW

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Wickerish In reply to K0suke [2014-08-08 21:22:35 +0000 UTC]

WITH A LOT OF SPARE TIME XD

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syviethorne [2014-08-07 15:53:42 +0000 UTC]

this is GORGEOUS omg *u*

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Wickerish In reply to syviethorne [2014-08-08 21:22:46 +0000 UTC]

dude thanks ;u; <3

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capsulenexus [2014-08-07 15:52:56 +0000 UTC]

this is so pretty!

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Wickerish In reply to capsulenexus [2014-08-08 21:22:53 +0000 UTC]

gracias!

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