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Published: 2013-05-16 14:22:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1746; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 65
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What is she waiting for?Thanks for all those guys who are making that incredible models to spark our imagination.
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I like the atmosphere here... ...but there are a couple or three things to watch out for; (only minor tho) The brightness of the light reflection in the window is too contrasted with the pitch black outside the window, which could be improved either by having something visible outside (enclosing the whole scene in a glossy cube would ensure that any glass in the window would have been visible - the blackness is because there is nothing outside to bounce the light back), or by changing the surface properties. The fact that the bright light is outside also has a tendency to show up problems with the wall geometry but if you look at the corners of the wall/pillars behind the table you can see light bleed throught the geometry at the point that they join; if you place a plane or two over the outside of the building where these are, they will disapear - I had the same issue on my 'Preaching To The Converted' and the light bleed gets worse the longer the render! (If you look up that image in my gallery, there are links showing how I set up the planes etc). There is still a bit of noise in the image, but the textures do seem to have come out well in the light. I'm also trying to understand the big black panel on the far right; its like the back wall has moved somehow, but I can't quite make out how the black area fits in with the geometry! It might be obvious when I know, but it stands out for me at the moment!
...but I am very impressed with the pose and the general layout and textures; some very nice work here, well done! `¬) (in fact this is probably my favourite image of yours so far!)
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THX for the long comment. I'll build on that...
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This is very good, though indeed the scaling is a bit weird, but the again that wisp of smoke is perfect!
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Superb pose, lights and environment!
Really love the wisp of smoke, it adds such a lot to the image, makes it so much more dynamic!
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How beautiful! May I inquire where the room comes from--I don't recognize it.
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Besides that weird scale problem (or choice?) the scene is scplendid! Excellent choice for the lighting
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Reality for Poser rulez! That's for the lights.
For the scale topic I must admit, that I realized it too late and then decided to keep it because she looks even more lost ; ))
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In effect: that adds to it, good choice as well.
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Good work
I like the model, and the lights are greatly chosen
The table and chair, or the girl is to big or to small
The atmosphere is great
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