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WildEllie โ Sneak peak #2 - Daughter of the river
Published: 2015-12-15 21:06:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 2638; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 0
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Wow, this took me a whole afternoon, but in the end I did it
first 3 panels of a re-written page
As I said on Tapastic, I'm slooooowing down the updates of the new pages of Volume 3 (probably 1 page ever two weeks? o.o) until February, because now I need to dedicate completely to this remake - the more time I dedicate to it, the sooner I'll finish, the sooner I'll print, and the sooner I'll return updating normally Volume 3 ^v^Indeed, this short pause is giving me the occasion to adjust the last 3 chapters of the comic (ah, you'll hate me for what I wrote!);
to be honest,ย I really needed a pause: I don't want to risk to make it become something I won't like in the future or...I don't feel "mine" just because I'm busy on 2 projects at once!
We'll have to explore Sean's personality, meet new people, show the war, kill many characters --things that will require a particular attention, so I know you'll understand UvU
Hope you like those sneak-peaks and previews, and let me know if you'd like me to continue posting them or if you'll like the surprise-effect when it'll be completed ^v^
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Comments: 27
I am in love with the rework. I think its the backgrounds that do it for me. It feels more real. Dont get me wrong I loved the first go around. This just shows shuch incredible growth. I love these sneak peeks.
Did you mean for Gim to look much older then them?
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I'm happy you could see the improvement ^^
For what concerns Gimkhana's look; no she isn't meant to be older, but in this panel it seems she looks like she is ^^" that's because I'm not very practical with kids, but I can make sure in the other panels she really looks like a 8 years old girl haha ^^ in this case it was the pose a bit tricky, so I messed a bit with her face
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I struggle with kids too, so I get it. I don't know if it's the body so much for me. It's the jaw line looks to strong for a kid. kids jaws are softer rounder. At least what I have observed. I'm No good at achieving it. I don't draw kids for a reason.
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Hmm, gim looks way to much like an adult in that frame and a lot less like a little girl. Not sure if that's what you were going for. A child's face is more rounded in with soft angles, compared to an adult's who has much harder and sharper ones like what you gave her in that frame. :3
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Well in this panel it seems so
but I can make sure in the other panels she really looks like a kid haha ^^
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The rework is looking wonderful so far Ellie~ <3
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Thank you very much
It's taking all my energies, probably never worked SO hard รงvรง
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It's really looking wonderful though, I am very excited to see it all come together~
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Djjah!y an afternoon. It would take me 3 days 
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Thank you very much
yeah I became a little faster thanks to the experience รงvรง otherwise it would have taken 3 days as well xD
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*starts saving up money for printed version* Can't wait to see finished remake c: About this sneak peak: as Tracy4angel said, Gimkhana looks a bit old here I think her chin and nose are a little too big for a child >_> Ta'regan is so cute here ย
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Yap the pose had put me a bit in difficulty soooo I messed up a bit with her look
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It's great that you focus all your energy on one project, the sooner you finish, the sooner we can get more updates
Even if sneak peaks are kind of cruel in a way (I WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S HAPPENING), it's still better than nothing. At least with sneak peaks we know that you are still working on the comic and you haven't disappeared from the face of the Earth XDย
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Yeah in fact I'm trying to be active both on here and on the other sites so that you all know I haven't abandoned my readers 8D
Also I'm planning to release a downloadable preview next month, probably รจ.รฉ
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That sounds great
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Awesome! I also remember this part, but she looks so older then them on this page...
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Well in this panel it seems so
but I can make sure in the other panels she really looks like a kid haha ^^
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Well that's what matters.
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