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Wiliart — I miss
Published: 2012-07-28 22:39:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 698; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 7
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Description I miss
the feeling of
your soft skin
against mine

I miss
the sore in
my paining heart
when you're away

I miss
the kiss
you gave me
every night

I miss
my love
always and ever
returned to me

I miss
you my love
as I stand here
before your fresh grave
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Comments: 18

Smallandsilent [2016-06-21 17:46:54 +0000 UTC]

It's so beautiful it made me cry. remind me of my friend, he died.
I couldn't tell him my feelings for him in time so I can only regret it in my life.

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TetraRocks [2012-08-06 23:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you are very good at capturing emotions!

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Wiliart In reply to TetraRocks [2012-08-13 23:44:33 +0000 UTC]

You think so? Thank you, I myself always doubt if I've put enough emotion in the poems.

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TetraRocks In reply to Wiliart [2012-08-19 22:26:56 +0000 UTC]

^^ Yeah, this is very good!

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Argentum-Lupae-Luna [2012-08-02 06:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of my emotions when my friend committed suicide...you captured the feelings of loss and love very well.

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Wiliart In reply to Argentum-Lupae-Luna [2012-08-14 11:22:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, sorry to hear your friend committed suicide though.

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Argentum-Lupae-Luna In reply to Wiliart [2012-08-14 14:44:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, love.

I miss her, and I hope that she has a better chance at happiness in her next life...I'm a believer in reincarnation, and considering how bad her situation was before she died and all the shite she went through, she deserves some good karma.

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ksa-stocks [2012-07-30 00:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Lovely!!!

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Wiliart In reply to ksa-stocks [2012-08-01 20:21:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly.

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avondaleklr [2012-07-29 22:55:51 +0000 UTC]

Love this. Well done.

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Wiliart In reply to avondaleklr [2012-08-01 20:21:00 +0000 UTC]

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newkidwithoutbraces [2012-07-29 22:47:30 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant, hun!

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Wiliart In reply to newkidwithoutbraces [2012-08-01 20:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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wdnest [2012-07-29 09:36:15 +0000 UTC]

Simple, wonderful message.

Great poem

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Wiliart In reply to wdnest [2012-08-01 20:20:17 +0000 UTC]

The biggest impact messages often come in the smallest packages.

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MelodieRox [2012-07-28 22:43:06 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad!!!

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Wiliart In reply to MelodieRox [2012-07-28 23:02:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but losing someone that means that much to you always is.

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MelodieRox In reply to Wiliart [2012-07-29 03:37:59 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that's true, it is. Loss is so shocking, like having the ground torn away from under you.

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