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Published: 2009-09-27 18:28:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 678; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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Calendula officinalis, known as Pot Marigold~~~~~~~~
Nikon D80, Nikkor VR 18-200mm 1:3.5-5.6 G ED
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First - I love the colors and saturation. Excellent use of these to ensure that the vibrant days of the end of summer are captured and preserved.
Second - the depth of field is almost perfect. I think I would have preferred a little more out of focus background. Not much, possibly 1 to 1 and a half stops more open. As it is, there is enough definition in the background that it can attract the eye away from the focus point of the flowers.
Third - I think that you could have removed the roofline in the lower right corner. It is a bit distracting. Clone it away with the sky and it will place more emphasis on the flowers and where you want the view to concentrate.
Overall this is a complete winner. Excellent composition, good angle and placement of the buildings and flowers.
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Thank you very much for this critique.
About this roof in the right down corner - I tried to remove it, but it was'nt look good. Maybe when I know better photoshop or other program...
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Pięknie zakomponowane i jakie nasycone kolory 
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... tak szybko odchodzą.
Dziękuję Ci
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wiem ^^ Akurat czytałem niedawno jakiś opis chińskich słodyczy z ryżu i płatków kwiatów, i tak mi się skojarzyło
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Strasznie przyjemny, kojący widoczek... Okiennica, kwiatki... Ech.
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