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WilsonWJr In reply to ??? [2009-04-19 15:58:15 +0000 UTC]
Heya Stephen!! Thanks so much for the critique!! My heart goes pitter pat anytime I click the critique button when submitting a piece! But I long to get insightful opinions on my work. I always want to improve and get better!! So thank you so much!!
First of all, AWESOME!!! I'm so glad that you feel these images could work in all those industries!! I think I'm tearing up a little bit! LOL! That means so much to me, you just don't know! Thanks!
You are dead on when you say that the color pallete is designated for this demographic. Most baby stuff is very, very pastellish and super soft. I may have over done that a bit. I'll play with adjusting the contrast levels and see if I can nudge things a bit.
When you talk about Geoffrey's feet are you talking about the one closest to us or the one in the back? (Sorry, I always get confused as to whether people are talking about my left and right or the characters left and right.) I appreciate any clarification you can give! I assume you're talking about the one closest to us. But I'll wait before I dig a hole for myself!! Because I do see a problem with that one! LOL! Thanks again for the crit brother!!
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StephenSchaffer In reply to WilsonWJr [2009-04-19 18:41:19 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you accepted the critique... and yes it is a humbling experience (assuming someone is not out to rip your head off with their criticism). And yes, I was speaking of the foot closest to us... it just seems a bit off, nothing major, but a little tweaking could really push this piece!
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PureAndWithoutAge [2011-02-02 07:39:58 +0000 UTC]
I like the richness of your colors! Cool!
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SuperSmurgger [2011-02-01 16:46:05 +0000 UTC]
The pacifier looks quite big^^ Adirable and delightful composition !!
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OzzieAstaroth [2011-02-01 03:15:05 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, that's just so cute! ^^
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WilsonWJr In reply to JMarcDodsonJr [2009-05-07 02:08:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm probably just gonna take the gums out. It seems to scare more than a few people. Or at the very least scale them back a lot!! LOL! Great minds think alike! I tried one tooth and it made him look like a creepy old man for some reason. LOL! So he'll probly stay toothless. Maybe I can add some drool down his chin! LOL!
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WilsonWJr In reply to JMarcDodsonJr [2009-05-07 16:11:03 +0000 UTC]
LOL! Yes Sir!!!! Right Away Sir!! I do have to fix his back leg though... but no worries, no drool! LOL!
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JMarcDodsonJr [2009-05-05 21:34:51 +0000 UTC]
Very cute, I love the look on his face. It's kinda like that really relieved look babies make just after they've just passed gas. Also, the shadow and shading on the objects are excellent. They look very three dimensional. The only thing I might change is the color of the liquid in his bottle. In my opinion it kind of clashes with the color of his outfit. Maybe milk instead of water?
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WilsonWJr In reply to JMarcDodsonJr [2009-05-07 02:09:47 +0000 UTC]
OMG! That looks like water to you!! Gee whiz..big fail on my part...it is milk. LOL!
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JMarcDodsonJr In reply to WilsonWJr [2009-05-07 14:11:11 +0000 UTC]
lol, it still looks like water to me, but maybe I'm just drawing from my life experiences. I dated a woman with an infant for a while during my undergrad years and I gave the kid water in her bottle more than milk. The milk gave her terrible gas, so unless it was meal time she got water because I didn't want to smell it.
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WilsonWJr In reply to JMarcDodsonJr [2009-05-07 16:09:15 +0000 UTC]
LOL! I thought baby farts didn't smell....shows how much I know!! maybe I should just make it Kool-Aid. Red flavor!
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JMarcDodsonJr In reply to WilsonWJr [2009-05-07 19:08:08 +0000 UTC]
lol, the baby is drinking from the kool-aid.
Yeah, baby farts smell, but it's kinda funny. After they fart they get a big smile on their face and sometimes just start laughing out of nowhere. When that happened I always cracked up.
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petitenajla [2009-04-25 19:03:14 +0000 UTC]
ey how would you define a spot illustration? I'm being held by ignorance here...
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WilsonWJr In reply to petitenajla [2009-04-26 16:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Have you ever read a Harry Potter book? Spot illustrations are those small b/w illustrations that would appear at the beginning of each chapter. Something less than a quarter page that can sometimes depict an event, character or object with the text it is being derived from. They can be black and white or in full color. But they generally only depict the main objects involved and don't focus on illustrating backgroud elements or surrounding items and characters.
The infant spot sheet is primarily showing an infant and a number of his articles, toys, etc. The background wallpaper is probably making it feel too much like one whole image. Is that what's confusing?
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neko-kyu [2009-04-22 17:59:53 +0000 UTC]
Nice job! :3 is this done with traditional media or a tablet?
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neko-kyu In reply to WilsonWJr [2009-04-22 18:52:52 +0000 UTC]
thats awesome xD tablet is better anyways :3 less mess and better price XD!
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Lomeloke [2009-04-20 06:23:29 +0000 UTC]
daaaw cute! i looove the face!
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SpiderGuile [2009-04-19 20:26:10 +0000 UTC]
So cute!!!!
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