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WEW. I was GOING to post it in it's original size but.... it's huge like... hoo big humongalodongus big... so I made it smaller!
ANYWAYS AHA
\owo/ Bayla's origin comic! Yes! My heart goes out for my wee sweetheart.
Buckle up here's some proper Bayla description and background! I am not really a good writer aha, it's more of a summary than anything. (Also huuuuuuuuuge string later on for the point breakdown, I had to have staff help me bcs TuT pea brain me.)

-~*~- Origin -~*~-

There once was a very clumsy and wreckless Asian House Gecko living around a small creek where insects were abundant. One day, after a small jackdaw made her lose her tail, she was relaxing in a branch of a nearby tree. Ikkit, having been watching the clumsy gecko the few times he passed her by found her to be the slightest bit amusing, an accident prone gecko wasn't all that common after all. Ikkit decided to toy with the gecko a while, using his shadow elemental to make the gecko run around in a frenzy to catch the small flies and shadow orbs. It's unknown wether it was accidental or not, but the fact is, that a shadow fly was hovering a bit too far off the branch of the tree the gecko was hunting in. The gecko, clumsy as she was, did not realize how far off the fly was, nor that she had lost all grip on the branch trying to reach it. She fell down into the small creek flowing bellow the branch. Small as she was, the impact on the water stunned her, and she ended up drowning in the shallow waters. Ikkit did not feel sympathy per se, but the gecko had been so amusing to play with he decided to keep her around in this world for longer.
Bayla came to, slowly rising from her basking spot in confusion, a myriad of questions echoing in her head but one stood out. Who was she?
Though lost and confused, Bayla did not feel disheartened or sad per se. For long days she struggled to situate herself, to understand what she had become and what she had once been. It took a few days but a few behaviours tipped the esk off. She found herself speeding after insects, enjoying long sunbaths as much as the weather allowed, all behaviours she noticed a few lizards display. Briefly she thought she was one of them but quickly discarded that thought as a few memories came back. Understanding flowed in as well as a sense of purpose. You can find her playing around with dragonflies and sometimes a few ways off her boundary on top of a random animal she climbed on top of to travel randomly.

-~*~- Point Breakdown -~*~-

Panel 1
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 35

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
Total GP per submission: 10

Panel 2 - original form
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+50 AP (Origin Prompt)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 90

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
+10 GP (Origin Prompt)
Total GP per submission: 22

Panel 3
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 30

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+4 GP (Simple/Vignette Background)
Total GP per submission: 10

Panel 4
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 40

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
Total GP per submission: 12

Panel 5 - The Other
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+50 AP (Origin Prompt)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 100

Panel 6
Base Score:
+5 AP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
+5 AP (Elemental: 5 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 15

Panel 7
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+5 AP (Elemental: 5 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
+10 AP (Esk Interaction Bonus: 10 AP * 1)
Total AP per submission: 65

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+4 GP (Simple/Vignette Background)
Total GP per submission: 10

Panel 8
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Elemental: 5 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 40

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
Total GP per submission: 10

Panel 9
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+5 AP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
+5 AP (Elemental: 5 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 30

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+2 GP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
Total GP per submission: 8

Panel 10 - No scoring: Just the head visible and the background doesn’t count as minimal

Panel 11
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+5 AP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 25

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+2 GP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
Total GP per submission: 8

Panel 12 - splash no scoring

Panel 13
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 20

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
Total GP per submission: 6

Panel 14
Base Score: 5 AP (Flat Color Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 45

Panel 15 - no scoring

Panel 16
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 25

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+4 GP (Simple/Vignette Background)
Total GP per submission: 8

Panel 17
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 40

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
Total GP per submission: 12

AP for this submission : 600
GP for Bayla for this submission: 104

Description
O-O
<-<
>->
o-o
.-.
o/

WEW. I was GOING to post it in it's original size but.... it's huge like... hoo big humongalodongus big... so I made it smaller!
ANYWAYS AHA
\owo/ Bayla's origin comic! Yes! My heart goes out for my wee sweetheart.
Buckle up here's some proper Bayla description and background! I am not really a good writer aha, it's more of a summary than anything. (Also huuuuuuuuuge string later on for the point breakdown, I had to have staff help me bcs TuT pea brain me.)

-~*~- Origin -~*~-

There once was a very clumsy and wreckless Asian House Gecko living around a small creek where insects were abundant. One day, after a small jackdaw made her lose her tail, she was relaxing in a branch of a nearby tree. Ikkit, having been watching the clumsy gecko the few times he passed her by found her to be the slightest bit amusing, an accident prone gecko wasn't all that common after all. Ikkit decided to toy with the gecko a while, using his shadow elemental to make the gecko run around in a frenzy to catch the small flies and shadow orbs. It's unknown wether it was accidental or not, but the fact is, that a shadow fly was hovering a bit too far off the branch of the tree the gecko was hunting in. The gecko, clumsy as she was, did not realize how far off the fly was, nor that she had lost all grip on the branch trying to reach it. She fell down into the small creek flowing bellow the branch. Small as she was, the impact on the water stunned her, and she ended up drowning in the shallow waters. Ikkit did not feel sympathy per se, but the gecko had been so amusing to play with he decided to keep her around in this world for longer.
Bayla came to, slowly rising from her basking spot in confusion, a myriad of questions echoing in her head but one stood out. Who was she?
Though lost and confused, Bayla did not feel disheartened or sad per se. For long days she struggled to situate herself, to understand what she had become and what she had once been. It took a few days but a few behaviours tipped the esk off. She found herself speeding after insects, enjoying long sunbaths as much as the weather allowed, all behaviours she noticed a few lizards display. Briefly she thought she was one of them but quickly discarded that thought as a few memories came back. Understanding flowed in as well as a sense of purpose. You can find her playing around with dragonflies and sometimes a few ways off her boundary on top of a random animal she climbed on top of to travel randomly.

-~*~- Point Breakdown -~*~-

Panel 1
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 35

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
Total GP per submission: 10

Panel 2 - original form
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+50 AP (Origin Prompt)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 90

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
+10 GP (Origin Prompt)
Total GP per submission: 22

Panel 3
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 30

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+4 GP (Simple/Vignette Background)
Total GP per submission: 10

Panel 4
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 40

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
Total GP per submission: 12

Panel 5 - The Other
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+50 AP (Origin Prompt)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 100

Panel 6
Base Score:
+5 AP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
+5 AP (Elemental: 5 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 15

Panel 7
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+5 AP (Elemental: 5 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
+10 AP (Esk Interaction Bonus: 10 AP * 1)
Total AP per submission: 65

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+4 GP (Simple/Vignette Background)
Total GP per submission: 10

Panel 8
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Elemental: 5 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 40

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
Total GP per submission: 10

Panel 9
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+5 AP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
+5 AP (Elemental: 5 AP * 1)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 30

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+2 GP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
Total GP per submission: 8

Panel 10 - No scoring: Just the head visible and the background doesn’t count as minimal

Panel 11
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+5 AP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 25

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+2 GP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
Total GP per submission: 8

Panel 12 - splash no scoring

Panel 13
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 20

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Abstract/Minimal Background)
Total GP per submission: 6

Panel 14
Base Score: 5 AP (Flat Color Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 45

Panel 15 - no scoring

Panel 16
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+10 AP (Simple/Vignette Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 25

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+4 GP (Simple/Vignette Background)
Total GP per submission: 8

Panel 17
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
Total AP per submission: 40

Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
Total GP per submission: 12

AP for this submission : 600
GP for Bayla for this submission: 104