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Published: 2014-06-09 00:10:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1052; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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CHECK IT OUT ON SSP!although it's been fun working on a lot of pages, i'm becoming pretty tired, so next week might return to the regular schedule. We'll see.
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Your concept for this comic is interesting (I love the goopy crows!) but I've been having trouble getting what you're conveying at times. For example, I had issues telling what gender Attley was in the first few pages and on this page I got a bit lost. See, I thought it was a flashback and didn't really understand that this mother-looking character was the same as the one who came out of the shower, I actually ended up thinking she was a he, and the grown up version of the kid we see here. So I read your latest page, got confused so I looked back and eventually realised that the white bar was just time passing and ect...
Not sure if I'm the only one who had difficulties following that or not, haha.
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ah i see! thanks for letting me know! i suppose putting a "later" on this page could help with that
as for attley's gender, i already knew she would get confused a lot, but its not too much of an issue for me. although attley prefers being called female she doesn't mind whatever people call her in the end, so i dont mind too much if people mistake her as something else. i only clarified she was female because the characters were going to start referring to her with female pronouns.
but again, thanks for letting me know! i'll see what i can do
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