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WindowLiickerx — Time is of the essence
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Published: 2011-11-28 20:09:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1266; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 21
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Well after watching dragonball z, I seen the part were Buu is watching the hour glass before the fight with Gotenks :3So I thought It would look pretty good as a picture~ ^.^
Turn out pretty well If I do say so myself <.<
Although a couple of mistakes on his boots ;D
However ENJOY >;3
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The picture is, overall, well done, but as you yourself have noted, there are a number of errors.
Starting with the shoes. ANY DBZ fan knows what Buu's shoes look like. How is it that you mixed up Piccolo's and Buu's? Strange, but I SUPPOSE it's forgiveable.... Only thing that isn't is the showing of his ankles. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
The belt is not quite right. I don't think it's supposed to stick out. It flows along his waist (no homo). His eyes also seem a bit off.... Aren't the pupils meant to be white and the scalera supposed to be black?
Next, the hourglass. The slightly greyer colouring of the sand and reflection of light on the glass.... Doesn't quite fit. Makes it seem a bit more like it's got water in it.
Lastly, the background. Don't mean to be nitpicking and whatnot, but I feel the lack of the palm trees makes Kami's lookout seem rather empty. Maybe I'm just remembering the placement of the foliage wrong. Dunno. Still, I feel that they should be there on the sides or something.
Oh, and... Aren't they in the sky? Where're the clouds? Maybe in the coloured version.
Despite some flaws, you're quite skilled. A well-made piece. I suppose this is somewhat old, so I'm guessing you've gotten better since this, but skill now doesn't change this picture. Keep going, do your best, and most important....
Don't try and be funny, just have fun.
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Thanks, yeah I see what you mean about there being a lack of some aspects in the line art: however isn't that the point of line art, not every detail should be added... That's normally added within the colouring stage, well that's what I thought happened.
But yeah, thanks for the truthful opinion on my drawing, I will take in everything you have said and try to improve...Also I would love it if you could comment once in a while with your truthful opinion on my deviants :3 I'm always willing to take in other people's views
Thanks.
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Ohh, and about the boots it's not that I got them wrong, it's just when Buu is on the look out and he has absorbed Piccolo his boots change, and Buu boots are different from when he turns to Kid Buu... That's all (:
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As I recall, this scene happened before he absorbed anyone.... He only absorbed Gotenks and Piccolo after going into the Hyberbolic Time Chamber, fighting Gotenks, getting so enraged over the exit being destroyed that he screamed his way out, massacred the Z-Fighters, fought Gotenks again, destroying Kami's Lookout in the process, outlasted Gotenks, got his ass handed to him by Gohan, blew himself up and duped Goten and Trunks into fusing.
Wow, it's like you haven't even SEEN the show. XD
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That's a bit harsh... Of course I've seen the show, any way: thanks for the comments (:
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sure any time and wood you mint hading me to your watch list plesese senes i haded you
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Haha it is XD I just couldn't think what it was at the time ;D Thanks <3
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No problem
Nice pic by the way
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