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page 2 : [link]Edit: Changed text and some outher things. Many thanks to those who comment and helped me both on sheezyart and deviantart.
EDIT 2 (text Concept by Thylaco. textEdited by VC BloodShine.)
She is very helpfule and I can´t understand how nice she is to help me, I will do a giftart for you, asante sana
Ah well here is the first prolque page of 2 pages. 
It is fantasy wolf comic. Don´t got the name yet becasue I want something new and orginal name that fits my story. I may redraw the secound panel later. I have about 15 pages skecthed, i had 18 but I delete 3, no longer desired. I will try to finish the secound page next week. Or atleast I will put up some pictures of my main char Windshade.Story, characters, backgrounds, text (with some help of my father) and all: A.I.M. Bernvi (C) 09 (Thylaco)
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Jag gillar storyn!^^ *läser resten*
great work!
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glad att du gillar den
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haha tack ^^ har föresten fått hjälp av med engeslkan. skall lägag till den nya texten sen
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Oh, this sounds like a very interesting comic I can't wait to see where it goes. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see the next page.
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yes, my goal is to upload the whole story this year,
kind of new year wish, XD
however I will be gone for two weeks, so it may take a while
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Nice. Well good luck with that and I can't wait to see it.
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Great colors, that convey the feelings very well. And I love the beginning. I'll certainly follow these. ^^
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I really want to know if people read my story, or people understand what I want to tell ^^
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Indeed it's a nice start. Wanna read the next page ^_^
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hehe you have to wait a while 
animation school and kenya travel will take some of my time for the next weeks XD
but my goal is to upload the whole comic this year
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Aw you're travrling to Kenya ? This sounds awesome. It's one of my dream to go there.
Hope you'll have a nice time!
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You over use 'sisters' a little too much, it'll be sweet if you can throw in their real names. Just a suggestion though, looks great so far. And I'm eager to see the next page in all of this, keep uploading!
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XD ah well, I haven´t all names yet because I want them be orginal and not like any outher 
yes I will upload more, my goal is to be finish with my comic this year. ^^
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Don't worry about names, I mean there's really nothing new under the sun.
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XD something new it has to be
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I like the story.
Do you mean 'Alpha' instead of 'Alpfa'? or that on purpose?
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alpha yes XD I speel it wrong first time, shame on me
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is this me wo write this? O_o
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It's okay. I'm not the greatest speller in the world, but for some reason I'm developing a small pet peeve about misspelled words in good comics.
I should be ashamed of myself, lol.
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The story sounds really awesome so far! 8)
--
I've don't have to be careful; I've got a gun!
-Homer Simpson
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I do I hope it will stay so, I have some pages that is hard to draw ^^
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I pretty sure it will
--
I've don't have to be careful; I've got a gun!
-Homer Simpson
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Great start, really interesting. Yes, there were some mistakes but everyone makes some kind of mistakes, I myself talk while I write so my comics so I hear myself say a word but I forget to write it in 
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misstakes still? but i edit it XD
what do I do wrong? It is annyoing, I am good at my own language, but suck in english XD
really, what kind of comics?
they have names but I don´t wan´t to say it.
it is fun to call them a and b. it is however only in this page I call them so.
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whoa, your's aren't as numerous as mine, I'm just glad my friends and Microsoft find them and correct them.
Check out my gallery
Oh I was about to say, no names :0
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XD
i have names
but don´t wanted to add them XD
liink please? i am kind of lazy
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many of your pages don´t work :/
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what :0 that's strange I upload whthin 3 months, r u sure, peculiar very peculiar
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XD becasue when I got the link and went to your gallery, your pictures was shown just white (when it is not working) >>
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well then go my gallery
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Haha, oops, I almost didn't spot the "alfa-alpha" mixed up since I'm so used to alfa with an f xD Oh me...
Anyway, this is looking great! Excellent storyline so far and fantastic artwork. The english was easily understandable. A few grammatical errors, perhaps, but none-the-less a great effort! I bet it's awfully hard to translate and all that D:
Looking forward to what you have to come! Bet it'll be fantastic.
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lol XD I have changed the text now
yes it very hard to translate, mainly becasue i am very good at my own launage, but very bad in english
so the english version is more simple >>
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Aww, that's ok. At least we know how hard you're trying! I'd probably be too lazy xD
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XD well there is english evreywhere ^^ movies, books, tv, etc, games
so we have to learn english as mutch as swedish ^^
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Wow! It seems to be a great comic!
Btw it is very similar to mine about horses
Great shading!
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do you mean similar in story?
thanks alot
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what do you mean similar story?
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yes in story
but I think it's just a coincidence
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do you also got sisters that is crazy?
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only in my mind
anyway I'm still impressed of your wolves
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XD
ah, well they are not that good,
you should see my old wolf comic XD those wolves is eh...
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what? those wolves are great!
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