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Published: 2018-09-10 10:07:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1015; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 0
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nicely put, the action just flows with the design, right on the spot
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Hi, nice work, like a hybrid between manga and western comics, but you have a couple of mistakes there.
In the first frame, first bubble: "And the doctors were sure that..."
In the first frame, third bubble: "You got wrapped up in this car accident..."
Feel free to hide this comment after you'll fix that (if you'll fix that).
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Hi! Thank you so much for the heads up! I really appreciate it~
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No problem.
If you'd like I could point out any other ones that I'll come across.
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So I'll take that as a "yes" ?
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Yeah, I started reading and couldn't help myself ^^'
More accurately I had those tabs open for a day and wanted to close some but didn't want to lose track if you'll say yes.
Worst case you would've deleted them.
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Ah, I see ^^
Anyways, thank you again~
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