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Published: 2004-11-04 00:24:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 106; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Once MorePrecise your words describe thy,
Too strong a passion to deny
My vision, perfect,
Your senses, strong,
No conscience of you to admit wrong
The red warmth shall stain the snow
And all your tears shall fall below
And fall they shall upon my cheek
Reminiscence of me will become weak
You lower me under your chin
Hands shake under my frigid skin
Not knowing it would come to this
That he has given his last kiss
Seeing of my cold dead corps
The mind flowing
The thoughts warped
For seeing my emotions bent
For all it was an accident
You lower thy body to the floor
Step away reaching for the door
Think about me and my life
Holding the silver blood stained knife
You look at me one time, once more
...And walk away, with no more to live for
-Katherine Tucker
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Comments: 4
wow... just wow. i mean i have written millions of poems like this but i think this one has spoken to me so loudly. super awesome job. and im a little envios of ur talent. but thats ok
~I'm leaving this behind I'll erase you from my mind
you were never meant to be mine~
-leigh-
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Nice portrayal of the emotions involved in such a situation, I have felt similar before and you did a good job describing how ones fells when they are left behind.
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thank you very much for the comment, and yes It just kind of came out of me.. you know?
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