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dweeblet [2018-05-05 16:32:19 +0000 UTC]

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hi my dude im just stopping by to say nice job!!! the color scheme is coherent and appealing, and i like the cooler tones for the eye to complement the rest. the character is fairly simple, but eyecatching at a glance, and seems to be overall very well designed!!
as far as the art itself goes, you're doing very well! the lines are pretty clean and not too sketchy while still feeling pretty loose, especially about the hair. you do have a few areas to work on, though:
the most notably one to me is that the body is too long, and the neck seems exceedingly thick. the farthest forelimb also has some notable issues with the joints / bending, so i recommend looking at pictures of real horses to get a better grasp on their anatomy (even in a style as simplified as mlp)
the face looks very nice overall, but i feel it would be improved if you took some time to give the character a mouth / nose (unless this was intentional, in which case 1. is there a reason? and 2. please make it more clear for the future)
lastly the ear! seems a bit too wide at the base, though this is more a matter of personal tastes.
you did a really good job!!! it's a hella cute design

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ValliAtTheDisco [2018-05-06 01:29:15 +0000 UTC]

I love your new hoof/leg style aaAA
And she's so pretty i can't aaaa ;w;

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polkadot-astronaut [2018-05-05 16:41:05 +0000 UTC]

hhm i tend to give my ponies very show-style names and meadowsweet came to mind immeadiatly, idk

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ArcticsnowfoxYT [2018-05-05 16:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Cindia, or Scintilla

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