ZanarNaryon [2017-06-17 09:17:18 +0000 UTC]
Few spelling mistakes on this page, though One should say either "Evronian spy-drone", or "Evrons spy-drones"
The transition between panel 1 and 2 seems just confusing. Is "stop spinning around" an italic term, and, if so, what does it mean?
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WinterPower98 In reply to ZanarNaryon [2017-06-17 09:30:27 +0000 UTC]
1) dont't mide the grammatical errors, I didn't check these pages twice so I didn't see the erorrs.
2) Yes spinning around is an italian term, is when somebody start go to a place and then came back to another quickly. I thought it could meen the same in english.
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ZanarNaryon In reply to WinterPower98 [2017-06-17 10:45:23 +0000 UTC]
It is a term in english, but pretty rarely used. It'd make more if he looked a bit more worried and asked if she was alright
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