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Wise-lies — Dimples and Blonde Hair
Published: 2012-09-02 07:15:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 268; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description the creaking pulse of sunlight
is beginning to shimmer
deafening the surrounding crowds.
can't you hear it?
&
when I laugh,
the tiny rumbles of my closeted chest
are lovingly gawking at your idle
knees
can't you see it?
&
soon enough,
we'll be delightfully estranged
to one another,
collecting triangles as memorials
for when our family photos
are buried.
can't you imagine it?
&
if I carry your baby,
if I ever hear him whispering
into my stomach,
"mother, mother"
I'll know he's inherited your
deep dimples
and blonde streaked hair.
&
won't you hope for that, too?
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Comments: 9

GUDRUN355 [2012-09-02 23:14:31 +0000 UTC]

I like the poem a great deal.

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Wise-lies In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-09-03 06:57:36 +0000 UTC]

thank you! I'm delighted you enjoy it

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GUDRUN355 In reply to Wise-lies [2012-09-03 11:01:51 +0000 UTC]

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intricately-ordinary [2012-09-02 07:23:01 +0000 UTC]

"won't you hope for that, too?"

this made my heart flutter it's so sweet!

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Wise-lies In reply to intricately-ordinary [2012-09-02 07:24:23 +0000 UTC]

aw, why thank you! i'm glad!

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GokuMartin [2012-09-02 07:17:27 +0000 UTC]

Vagando por las calles,
mirando la gente pasar,(la gente pasar)
el extraño del pelo largo
sin preocupaciones va.

Hay fuego en su mirada
y un poco de insatisfacción (de insatisfaccíon)
por esa mujer que siempre quiso
y nunca pudo amar, jamás, jamás.

Inútil es que trates de entender
o interpretar quizás sus actos,
el es un rey extraño
un rey del pelo largo.

Hay fuego en su mirada
y un poco de insatisfacción (insatisfacción)
por esa madre que siempre quiso
y nunca pudo amar, jamás, jamás

Inútil es que trates de entender
o interpretar quizás sus actos
el es un rey extraño
un rey del pelo largo.

Vagando por las calles
mirando la gente pasar (la gente pasar)
el extraño del pelo largo
el extraño del pelo largo,
el extraño del pelo largo
sin preocupaciones va.

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Wise-lies In reply to GokuMartin [2012-09-02 07:20:29 +0000 UTC]

I don't understand why you've posted a seperate poem on mine?

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intricately-ordinary In reply to Wise-lies [2012-09-02 07:22:20 +0000 UTC]

..if only I were more fluent in Spanish XD no entiendo.

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Wise-lies In reply to intricately-ordinary [2012-09-02 07:23:30 +0000 UTC]

ahahah me too if only...

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