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Wise-lies — They Were Lost
Published: 2012-09-02 11:34:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description eyes crunched together
fingers clutching the edges of his
sleeves
leaping salty drops of water
slashing the oxygen pools.
breathe.
he touched her simmering
elbows
shh.
silent echoes burrowed
their way into her
ridged throat
there's no way.
she couldn't breathe.
his eyes flickered rain
for a slight moment.

but she was hopelessly lost

and he was too.
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Comments: 4

GUDRUN355 [2012-09-02 23:11:05 +0000 UTC]

They were in love and there was no way around it.

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Wise-lies In reply to GUDRUN355 [2012-09-03 06:57:01 +0000 UTC]

I guess they were doomed from the start.

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intricately-ordinary [2012-09-02 17:17:30 +0000 UTC]

I love how you incorporate breathing into your poems

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Wise-lies In reply to intricately-ordinary [2012-09-03 06:57:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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